its a good reencarnation/system story, the main characters struggles sometimes seemed forced but completly understandable. since im a #system fan, i hope the other stories go on in this same line.
I'll admit now that not all the Quillverse stories are system-based. But the AJ sequel "Outclassing the Achievement Junkie" is definitely system based, with Jack tweaking the system and building whole new world(s) to explore. Hope to see you join the new adventure, friend ;)