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Chillyy
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Not gonna lie. I was really excited in the beginning. I thought MC is not going to be some kind of pushover but his own man. He couldn't care less about king and the royalty, and to be honest i liked it and I hoped it would stay that way. But boy was I wrong. The selfish "hero" turned out to be typical cliche virgin that shits his pants whenever girl touches him. But let's leave that aside. The first thing that surprised me was the absolute idiocy of the MC and side characters. "Oh you have just found a legendary fox that is known in legends as a beast that burns everything to the ground with its hellish flames? LET'S TALK ABOUT PUBLICLY SO EVERYONE KNOWS." "Oh you have formed a party with some douchebags that you don't trust aparat from the Hunter and Samurai-sensei? Let's tell them that you own a legendary beast. Especially when two of the members are dodgy AF at that point." "Oh you want to go to another kingdom (that would gladly go to war with yours) to loot an ancient Tomb that belong to a noble family? Oh go ahead but change your face because you're too famous. Oh, oh and don't bother with changing your name because it's really hard to connect the dots between a rising star of a hero and a random overpowered 20lvl character of the same name, especially when you tell your enemies that your name is real. Also don't forget the overpowered item that makes you invisible but don't use it to escape from the tomb. Threaten the noble families instead so it can result in your girlfriend death. But hey you just got yourself another girlfriend!" Then the worst happend. The harem. My god is it crap. Everyone falls for MC after 15 minutes of knowing him. Then MC is FORCED to double marriage, and 2 other girls want to sleep with/marry him. He turnes into a complete virgin-pushover. I was reading through it hoping that those girls would die out at some point so the author can actually start writing a good story, but as of 200+ chapter it's only getting worse. The interactions between the MC and his wives/concubines are really dry and annoying. They are actally worse than fillers in Bleach anime. And the sad part is, those interactions are getting more and more common. Those 'lovely' wives have a almost non-existant personality. Actually decent characters like the Hunter and Samurai are barely talked about later on. The main focus is on the harem. Most human opponents MC meets are just typical, cliche, prideful young masters that get whooped in three sentences. By the way, don't get it twisted. I don't mean that the MC should be ruthless and merciless psycho. I just wish he had some interesting personality, backbone or something. Anything honestly. Because of that i decided to drop it at around chapter 230ish. My english might not be the best as it's not my first language so my apologies if reading this hurt your brain in anyway ♥. Sorry for the rant but this story just annoyed me. Waste of coins/free passes. Do not recommend.

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thanks for the honest feedback. there are many things I would've handled differently now that I'm a more experienced author, that I'll definitely admit. But, in case you were curious, starting around 240-250, the "romance" takes a back seat and you see A LOT more of the characters you love, like the hunter, samurai, and the warring gods. Again, thanks for trying the story and sharing feedback. It helps me grow a lot as an author and I hope you find the entertainment you're looking for!