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Review Detail of SinkingShips in Power Up, Artist Yang!

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Writing Quality: 5 stars. This novel has some good grammar (not perfect) but far above webnovel standards. Author draws the line before the writing becomes over descriptive (though I have no problem with that). In a nutshell, the writing isn't verbose and anyone can enjoy this writing with immense satisfaction. Oh, Grammar Nazis can jump in without any fears. Story Development: A solid five stars. This is a slow paced story. When I say slow, it's extremely slow. And I like it. There is enough room for slow burn romance, mystery and sad flashbacks of past too. Notable points: 1. Since the author is an artist, and the story is about a troubled artist, you'll find lots of art and principles of art. You can see the author's love for art in here. Though I can barely draw a stick man, I enjoyed reading everything...from art principles to struggles of artists. 2. This story does not fall in 'the boy and girl meet and they fall in love' category. It's more like the boy and girl meet...and meet...then talk, fight, talk, maybe flirt a little...and this goes on till the day one of them has a sudden enlightenment. There is beauty in slow romance. Watching two flawed characters beginning to trust and love is more believable and memorable. We're 200 chapters in and there are barely a few hints of the upcoming romance. So, don't expect a kissing scene any time soon. You're bound to be disappointed. However, if you happen to enjoy slow burn romances, then this is the one for you. Character Design: 5 stars. There's a great character development going on...and you're not going to find any cardboard cut characters here. They make mistakes, they learn...and you'll feel as if you're invading their minds. Author does a beautiful job with her characters and you'll see each leaving their unique mark on the story. World Background: 5 stars. The setting is a fictional dynasty forged with elements of ancient China. Author did her research and her enthusiasm is reflected when she writes about antiques and relics. Stability of Updates: 4 stars. Given the solid work, I think author is doing a good job with her update schedule.

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yaoyueyi
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omggg this actually makes me want to cry (in a good way), you are seriously too kind for taking the time to write this lengthy review T_T <33 so my response... writing quality: ty for the 5 stars!! I know that I do let some mistakes slip by on accident, so I'm actually really happy that you rated 5 stars!! story development: ayy slow burn ganggg!! i love me some slow burn so I'm glad you like it too. haha. and hey, knowing how to draw a stickman is better than nothing ;) it's never too late to learn art if you're interested :D character design: the way you described this section was so nice <3 made me emotional. I'm super happy to hear that you like the way the characters turned out!! world bg: I'm honored to receive a 5 stars in this section as well T_T <33 update stability: tbh i'm also honored to receive a 4 star LOL. if I were to rate it, I would probably put it at a 3 stars, so getting a 4 stars is great!!! hope you can bear with me in the future if some updates take a little extra time! anyways, overall, this review seriously made my day amazing & brought a smile to my face. I am definitely pinning this, it's awesome <33 thank you so much for reading/reviewing/supporting!!! hugs

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Excellent review. You nailed it.

DragneelMb
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Agreed with everything u said fam