Review Detail of NyanFabulous in Lust, like Vengeance, Demands Red

Read all the chapters in 3 days, have been enjoying it a lot. Cool story, characters and world building, including kingdom building... There are still some grammar errors and some caused by distraction but they have been diminishing so I don't really see a problem. Only thing that i find a little annoying isn't the grammar errors but the punctuation ones, those are really important, if you could pay a little more attention to them, since they are really essential for the telling of a story and the reader's impression of it... would be a great boost to this novel. In conclusion, great work, pls don't look at my criticism as somethhing bad because that wasn't my intention and keep on doing what you do. You have something really good here, keep up :3 Cheers ;)