Enjoy that it’s down a path of darkness and evil. Curious on where it will go next. Keep up the good work. Plus’ Characters feel like they are full and have varying changes. The protagonist uses charm and manipulation to control everything. Using these schemes she is able to deal with people efficiently with out them noticing much is going on. Having seen an ****** siscon before giving it a bit of uniqueness to the family. Cons The charm aspect seems to go on and off. This makes it so people aren’t actually chasing after her unless its relevant to the plot. The brother seems to make things a mess constantly. When things do go wrong it’s almost as if it is the plan for that one thing to go wrong, so there’s little to no actually back and Forth in the schemes.
Stupid_villain
Liked by 1 people
LIKE