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existing
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The story made me read it fast because it keeps on adding my curiosity. So I didn't bother looking for grammar and spelling errors. Stability of updates: excellent. 5 CH now in a period of 5-6 days? Story development: the MC just started to develop his abilities, couldn't say more since it's only starting. Character design: like what some people on the comment said, mc is somehow like deku. A bullied kid>got powers>his bully came with him on the academy>they will become enemies. Fun Prediction: they're going to be friends in the future? 😊😂 I still like the MC tho, got a good impression of him. I like that he's into inventing. The vibes he gave me is kinda like deku of hero academia/ a bit Dean of dark king / and a bit Edward elric? World background: the world after apocalypse + steam punk era. Deserves 5/5 for me. Suggestions? No suggestions haha. Just keep doing this and don't drop it if possible. ✔️Added in my library

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Steampunk Apocalypse!

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SnoozySloth
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Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, Edward Elric was definitely an inspiration for the MC. I've been watching MHA lately so I think Deku snuck up on me without me realizing it lol. Dark King is also one of my favorites, so Dean probably had an influence as well.

existing
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Haha this novel is already on the right track. The potentials are definitely there and I don't really want to give suggestions bc it might influence your writing.

rolas
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thanks to your review i wont start reading this. thumbs up for your good work.

LEE_nation
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Excited to read this novel. So much positive reactions. 😄

manthan752
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I think u r right👍🏻👍🏻

LokiMaster
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Any romance?

BeshadowedWanderer
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It goes on so much more fun ways...

Seradgi_Nasuioloer
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Too bad The author seems to have dropped it

BeshadowedWanderer:It goes on so much more fun ways...
DaoistOdw0i5
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Nice