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Seradgi_Nasuioloer

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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
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    Why is the author repeatedly changing past tense and present tense and also changing third person narration and first person narration now

    "Rose, would it trouble you too much if I rawed you while you worked?" I don't know where the words came from or how they found their way pushed out of my chest, but they nonetheless squirm their way out, and once more I feel a sense of sudden panic and confusion.
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    Becoming the King of A New Filthy World
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
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    Maybe the man can cure diseases and end wars and bring peace forever Well, we are lucky someone deranged and perverted didn't get this power. But who is Christie, really

    Ch 7 Chapter 7: Lucas's ideal world!
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
    Replied to Purified_D2

    "They are the universal symbol of a man who has given up hope! " - Nuclear Nadal

    "Not just me. Any woman. You could go up to any woman, press your dick against her cheek, and she won't mind, I promise you. But you can do more than that, too; a lot is happening here, and all really good stuff, I promise. You're king of the universe now. Not only can you use any woman freely, but you can also convince anyone of anything with your words. Just tell someone something, and they'll accept it as truth, I promise. It sounds made up and insane, doesn't it? But it's real. You can do whatever you want with this power, and it will slowly shape the world around the choices you make. If that means having more girls walk around with tops like these, then everything is going to start looking a whole lot more slutty. If it means casual public blowjobs as a greeting, then soon that will be the norm."
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    Becoming the King of A New Filthy World
    Fantasy · Alex_morg
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
    Commented

    Enjoy man, it's awesome

    "What the fuck is this?" Lucas asks, looking at her with an immense frustration. How does he even begin to ask her what this is? "And is this somehow your fault?"
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    Becoming the King of A New Filthy World
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
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    I thought everyone here would be white, lol. Well, such stories are usually from Japan. But nice to see things set in a Western environment

    Relentless perfectionism incarnated into a thirty five year-old Japanese woman who has brought a new reign of terror to the floor.
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    Becoming the King of A New Filthy World
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
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    She is taking advantage of his confusion. That makes things more relishing

    Ch 5 Chapter 5: what is happening? [R-18+]
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    Becoming the King of A New Filthy World
    Fantasy · Alex_morg
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
    Commented

    Not short enough, make it shorter

    Her super short skirt seems absolutely formal by comparison, and you can't help but stare at her chest in equal parts incredulity and appreciation.
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    Becoming the King of A New Filthy World
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
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    How old is she? 30 something

    At least not in comparison to what Christine is wearing, which is completely inappropriate for her age. 
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
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    So that's why you were torturing us with those repeated passages earlier, author

    Then another one to get him through the rest of the work week and into his weekend. He has become accustomed to the pattern, and he has come to terms with the fact that life in general consists of a certain degree of rigorous repetition.
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
    Commented

    Soon, all other women will become like this. Also, author. You need to improve your grammar

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Pleasure [R-18+]
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
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    That's an amazing world If it were true, it would be so crazy and fun. But STDs exist

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Know what? Make My Dream Come True! [R-18+]
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
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    Well, there's still plenty of grammar mistakes Are you a native speaker, author Xiansheng

    This is a rewritten version and I have fixed almost every grammar mistake I found, but if you find some point them out. And don't forget to send gifts, golden tickets or some power stone.
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
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    How common might this fantasy be

    "That while my lunch was being prepared, I could put my waitress in a headlock and fuck her as she was bent over the table. I want to be able to say anything to them and have them not only trust what I say but also act as though it is entirely normal when I do so. By fucking her, I wouldn't be doing anything particularly shocking; I'd just be acting normally, like other people do. They would put on an act of complete and utter normalcy, and then go about their days as usual." He finishes his explanation and chugging more liquor.
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    Becoming the King of A New Filthy World
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
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    We need more leg spreaders in this world, definitely

    "Could we get some leg spreaders? " she requests, before turning to him with a smile and saying, "I guarantee that the drinks will be on me. Do you like leg spreaders?" She continued by leaning in even more and saying, "The drink, or the kind of girl."
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    Becoming the King of A New Filthy World
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
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    Sad to see all these events through bite-sized descriptions rather than detailed stories. Well, all good things come to an end(some too quickly) Nice to see Iraq didn't get invaded anytime at all. Hail the world, even though Afghanistan still suffered

    Ch 39 Epilogue: Timeline
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    Saddam Nation (ended early because of insane people)
    History · Mandamus
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
    Commented

    Thank God

    President Al Gore announces sanctions on Afghanistan until it produces the culprits of the attack including Osama Bin Laden. Al Gore refuses to direct a war against the Asian country.
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    Saddam Nation (ended early because of insane people)
    History · Mandamus
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
    Commented

    This is funny. Doesn't that guy know that Saddam was a secular Baathist dictator? He wasn't a strongly religious figure either.

    Ch 38 People are absolutely insane...fucking hell
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    Saddam Nation (ended early because of insane people)
    History · Mandamus
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
    Commented

    Blah Blah Blah So a great leader is one who passes civilians?

    i have not read the book but from what i read from the comments you are pushing every wrong button from the point of view of every Arabian what you are doing is not "better" you are just going against our every teaching and study what you are doing destroys our tradition which is highly valued here what you made in the story will just push the country to rebellion and please if you don't understand politics and what you are doing please stop and delete this bullshit as you will never understand what we Arabians went through we always wanted a strong leader and Saddam was perfect to this day he is a celebrity of a strong leader every young man here in any Arabian country looks up to he is the perfect leader because we Arabians did not see strong leaders for a long time and we are just yearning for one so please stop throwing dirt on his image.
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    Saddam Nation (ended early because of insane people)
    History · Mandamus
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
    Commented

    Let's see how well the computers will run in this era

    Ch 37 Chapter 35: PCs
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    Saddam Nation (ended early because of insane people)
    History · Mandamus
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  • Seradgi_Nasuioloer
    Seradgi_Nasuioloer1yr
    Replied to SomeRetardedGamer

    Oo That's gonna interfere in the way of Pan Africanism

    Ch 37 Chapter 35: PCs
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    Saddam Nation (ended early because of insane people)
    History · Mandamus
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