To everybody who read my novel, THANK YOU VERY,VERY MUCH. In the beginning, i write this novel for fun only or when I have time. But, i havent expected that it can gather 50,000 views!! Seriously, i didn’t expect it. Moreover, somebody even give me power stone ranking!! Therefore I renew my determination. I may be a beginner but I will definitely make this better than ever!! Please keep supporting me!! One more thing. Give comment if you have time. It give me support and advice for the upcoming chapters. Enjoy!!😭😁
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LIKEreinsd:It will be sword art online for now. But i will add more cross over for the future.
I think you should add sao in the summary. I Usually skip over novels that don't have the name of the fan-fiction in their summary. I'm sure I'm not the only one. Thx for responding.
reinsd:It will be sword art online for now. But i will add more cross over for the future.
Thanks for the advice buddy. I already add it. Please comment another thing that wonders you. I will take any comment that will help to improve my novel
ClanOfOne:I think you should add sao in the summary. I Usually skip over novels that don't have the name of the fan-fiction in their summary. I'm sure I'm not the only one. Thx for responding.
I have just begun to read your novel. I have a bit of advice, however I don't want to release spoilers, for those who have not read it. So I will leave my advice in the novel.
reinsd:Thanks for the advice buddy. I already add it. Please comment another thing that wonders you. I will take any comment that will help to improve my novel
ClanOfOne:I have just begun to read your novel. I have a bit of advice, however I don't want to release spoilers, for those who have not read it. So I will leave my advice in the novel.
I already read it. Thanks for your detailed comment. It helps me a lot😭😉 ...kind of sad for the negative review but will improve it
ClanOfOne:I just got caught up to the latest chapter my comments are in the 1st half.
Not a bad novel. It is just the first part to confusing, otherwise great. As far as I know you have been the only one to do a sao fan-fiction. This makes you novel interesting. Sao is a bit controversial I lot of people hate it and a lot of people like it. I have only watched the first season don't know if it is good after it.
reinsd:I already read it. Thanks for your detailed comment. It helps me a lot😭😉 ...kind of sad for the negative review but will improve it
ClanOfOne:Not a bad novel. It is just the first part to confusing, otherwise great. As far as I know you have been the only one to do a sao fan-fiction. This makes you novel interesting. Sao is a bit controversial I lot of people hate it and a lot of people like it. I have only watched the first season don't know if it is good after it.
i'm not really that interested in the whole premise of the story but the way you write about the characters are fvcking amazing, it has this vibe where I can read it comfortably without losing interest? something like a flow? i really like it especially on how you portray the mc is really good! just minor grammar mistakes here and there but its all good! good job!
ClanOfOne:Not a bad novel. It is just the first part to confusing, otherwise great. As far as I know you have been the only one to do a sao fan-fiction. This makes you novel interesting. Sao is a bit controversial I lot of people hate it and a lot of people like it. I have only watched the first season don't know if it is good after it.
I wonder if you will do something with asuna. She is the best wife that you can have haha. AND GOOD NOVEL
reinsd:There’s romance. As for the rest, i cant tell much since it will be spoiler
yourname128:I wonder if you will do something with asuna. She is the best wife that you can have haha. AND GOOD NOVEL
Author-san personally I believe some people don't like sao cz of the lack of detail about the character development...I mean no one knows how krito became black swordsman or Asuna the lightning falsh or so...you get it what I'm trying to say right?..I mean they showed like 2 or 3 boss fights out of all 100 floors...so please show us the path the mc takes along with obstacles he encounters...which you are doing fine and keep it up...lastly your novel rocks!!!!...😋😋😋😋