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Review Detail of ShuYme in Naruto System Within Naruto

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ShuYme
ShuYmeLv52yrShuYme

Very bad story, mc gets basically unbeatable after 40 chapters,Tsunade falls in love with a SIX YEAR OLD CHILD while being 11. The writing style is sloppy and chaotic and the premise behind the story is ridiculous. Half the chapter words are pseudo math about bloodline drops or Smt equally ridiculous. The story introduces new oc’s then immidiately skips any dialogue and or draws wholly unreallistic plot lines to Further the non excisting plot in order to make this sh**show of a story. Gary sue mc, not worth the time i wasted on it.

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Naruto System Within Naruto

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Yamiya
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Thank tou for the good reiview i cant Wait to read it now [img=recommend][img=recommend]