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Review Detail of Randolph03 in The Anime Trope System: Stone vs. the Viper, a LitRPG novel. [Froze]

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Randolph03
Randolph03Lv55yrRandolph03

Well, to be honest, the story itself is not that bad... the pacing is quite good and not too much info dump... The MC is quite likeable, not a pussy and not a psycopath too... he doesn't fall to just any random girl and not all random girl just jump into him... The only backside is the sentencd arrangement, or the grammar... it's making it hard to understand what it's about without focusing deeply and most people read nove superficially so... yeah... maybe people dropped because of this... and lastly... the system notification is getting old that it's not that funny anymore... Well, overally it's an enjoyable read? Of coure there are actions and 'actions'

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The Anime Trope System: Stone vs. the Viper, a LitRPG novel. [Froze]

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Ninefingers
NinefingersLv12Ninefingers

A fair review, but later on from about chapter 60-70 I think every single girl the protagonist comes across instantly falls for him. Not to mention somehow nearly all of them are hanging out together amicably despite all being his lovers. Look its not terrible, the author does provide explanation and what not; its just so over the top I'm telling you the only way I'd pick this up again is if Atwater realises that less is more I mean I'm almost rooting for the the viper and he's a damn psychopath. So to sum up a good novel but in my opinion it really needs to rein back the hero worship and honestly the sex too.

lazyvampiredemonas
lazyvampiredemonasLv4lazyvampiredemonas

I wonder if clyde is atually a yandere good at almost everything and very smart as well maybe that why his overpowered almost all yandere in this novel are overpowered that also explain why he can kill people with no fear like what mortom said creature in this world are sataint being with inteligence

lazyvampiredemonas
lazyvampiredemonasLv4lazyvampiredemonas

I wonder if clyde is atually a yandere good at almost everything and very smart as well maybe that why his overpowered almost all yandere in this novel are overpowered that also explain why he can kill people with no fear like what mortom said creature in this world are sataint being with inteligence