Review Detail of taodaoist in Heavenly Dao Child
Review detail
I can’t with good conscience give this story a good review, the grammar is absolutely horrible, not bad, not very bad but horrendous, many mistakes and very poorly put together sentences. The character feel shallow and fake, and the very poor grammar just makes it even worse, so far the world backgroubd is nonexisting so I am sorry author but please get better at english or have someone translate this for you from your language to english, as of this review I have read til chapter 12 and I gave up! Hope you get better!
Heavenly Dao Child
SagelyDaoist
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Thank you for the review and apologize for my mistakes. When I started writing it at that time I was learning English and I still am though I have improved a bit and as such, I have begun rectifying and replace and if you still wish to reread it then please feel welcome to after a week and by then I hope I would have rectified all mistake till my latest chapters.
