Pretty good so far! Not a bad read to waste some time, pacing is good, wish they would describe the outside world/clothing/food a bit more but its only been 2 chapters.
Thanks for the review! but thing with the describing in the clothing is that i can only say so much for clothing since theres all sorts of them. I kind of left it to the readers imagination but i will be specific if have to be in a specific scene.
plus it a modern world no advance tech or anything. so just think of it as a modern day community. and for food itll be an easy fix in future chapters if there is another dining scene