I'm shocked by another overall score of 5 points for a trash story... Well now it will change.... One of the examples of how not to write. Not absolute horror, but nothing really interesting, plus lame logic. If the author would add a little plot and communication between the characters and also diluted the text with side stories, it could become more readable. A little more readable....
immortalmagcian
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LIKEWhen everyone puts the absolute five. The text which among the fictions I read is on the 9856 place This is a fairly honest estimate So do not invent nonsense, it's just not a very high-quality text Also get out of your assumptions and at the same time pull your stick out of your ass
certainDaoist:Elder this is the 2nd time i find, turmanting starter authors, i kinda feel like you are a certain ossan from hunterxhunter tasked with breaking newbies, dafuq dude chill and remove that stick up you ass
But, here's we are talking about newbies here, we are not in some law firm, to watch for loopholes and invest heavily in quality, besides its not like he is getting paid to deliver what you are requiring, chill, Relax and lets watch the sunset 🌇
Elder:When everyone puts the absolute five. The text which among the fictions I read is on the 9856 place This is a fairly honest estimate So do not invent nonsense, it's just not a very high-quality text Also get out of your assumptions and at the same time pull your stick out of your ass
To find the normal text, I have to read a sea of such fanfics Thanks to a bunch of ideal ratings, they stand at the top of the list! If you do not want everyone to stumble on the bad text recommended by a bunch of people Put an honest assessment and do not justify that they are newcomers. One lower score I have given to the bad text already helps other people find better text faster.
certainDaoist:But, here's we are talking about newbies here, we are not in some law firm, to watch for loopholes and invest heavily in quality, besides its not like he is getting paid to deliver what you are requiring, chill, Relax and lets watch the sunset 🌇
OK let's agree on one thing the webnovel service still lacks on its filter department, personally it would be great if they separated original work with pro works, and after a professional review some of the original work gets passed Tonto tab, otherwise stays in old place, like this everyone gets happy, chill every problem has a solution don't be angry and send a suggestion to webnovel support if you want too since am lazy (lazy to the point I have scratch on my back,... Hmm I should get a maid... That old foggie got a couple hundreds last week)
Elder:To find the normal text, I have to read a sea of such fanfics Thanks to a bunch of ideal ratings, they stand at the top of the list! If you do not want everyone to stumble on the bad text recommended by a bunch of people Put an honest assessment and do not justify that they are newcomers. One lower score I have given to the bad text already helps other people find better text faster.
this kind of logic does'nt work. just because i can't cook does'nt mean i don't know if something is nasty. i don't need to be a good writer to see if a novel is bad or good, having read many novel(experience) will enable you to make decent judgement.
damn_Youkage:Elder if your so good why don't you write you own story that can blows our mind...
regarding low ratings. well, i tend to give bad rating to bad novels and never have i ever given somebody 5 stars. i have yet to find a perfect novel. 5 stars for newcomers is like a trophy for effort, fun for kids but adults don't play that way. if you look at the 5 star reviews there is rarely an explanation as to how that raitng came to be, usually the review says"need to fill 140 characters" on repeat. they have no reason to give 5 stars and do it just because. so i always have to scroll to the lower ratings to find out what the novel really is like bc they explain why the novel is bad, they're more trustworthy than" great novel 5 stars!!!".
damn_Youkage:Elder if your so good why don't you write you own story that can blows our mind...
Roktah:this kind of logic does'nt work. just because i can't cook does'nt mean i don't know if something is nasty. i don't need to be a good writer to see if a novel is bad or good, having read many novel(experience) will enable you to make decent judgement.
don't be picky? were you trying to sound smart. even if i can't cook im still going to choose my dish. if it was just the choice between fish meat and veggies i would'nt be picky. but sorry i don't want sewer water with **** brickets, just bc the cook does'nt know thats not supposed to be on the plate. if thats your thing go ahead and eat it. review section is for reviewing that includes criticism.
damn_Youkage:If you can't cook then don't be so pickyyy.
Roktah:don't be picky? were you trying to sound smart. even if i can't cook im still going to choose my dish. if it was just the choice between fish meat and veggies i would'nt be picky. but sorry i don't want sewer water with **** brickets, just bc the cook does'nt know thats not supposed to be on the plate. if thats your thing go ahead and eat it. review section is for reviewing that includes criticism.
desevedly so although i did say your novel was good and i enjoy reading it, i just had one point of criticism. i can't lie though, i do love to pick fights.
Myumara:Don't listen to Roktah!!! He hates me because I'm a big red face and gave my novel a bad review!!!
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I honestly think we should just let other say what they want. Opinions are opinions, what matters is what you yourself think. If you liked this story, great!! If you hated it, great!!! If the author can’t take serious criticism, then he/she won’t last in this kind of world. Writing isn’t for them. But, if they can use that criticism to improve themselves, then they are perfect for this world of authors and stories and what not.
At least op gave some thought to what he was saying. Rather them saying novel is trash he posted some ways he believes it could be improved. Although not the best example it is constructive criticism so I don't think he is bashing the newbies but giving his honest opinion on the novel and his disgust for misleading comments.
certainDaoist:Elder this is the 2nd time i find, turmanting starter authors, i kinda feel like you are a certain ossan from hunterxhunter tasked with breaking newbies, dafuq dude chill and remove that stick up you ass
The thing is i posted that comment based on multiple ocasions i saw that user being kinda hostil or in better words aggressive, but from an angle he is right but who am to judge. Stilll sticking with my point of view : chill give advices and if you bash ,bash thous fakers with fake reviouws , but for authors tell him where he sucks and how to improve , few more words in your review wont hurt your fingertips ?
Randomlyrandom:At least op gave some thought to what he was saying. Rather them saying novel is trash he posted some ways he believes it could be improved. Although not the best example it is constructive criticism so I don't think he is bashing the newbies but giving his honest opinion on the novel and his disgust for misleading comments.
Atleast give him encouragement you just hurt the mans heart he was just starting he fixed many errors
Elder:When everyone puts the absolute five. The text which among the fictions I read is on the 9856 place This is a fairly honest estimate So do not invent nonsense, it's just not a very high-quality text Also get out of your assumptions and at the same time pull your stick out of your ass