Review Detail of Mandeer in Divine Emperor of Death
Review detail
My personal in depth review, (SPOILERS AHEAD so read at your own Caution, TLDR below) TLDR: Please heed my advice and don't waste your time reading this novel, I know I regret these last few days. Where should I start. I read up to about 900 chapters and then spoiled myself a bit further on to confirm one of the reasons I dropped this novel. Before I begin, I would like to mention that I think the overall grammar and spelling throughout the novel had been really good and I didn't notice much mistakes or sentences that flowed weird and the world building was also pretty good and in depth of the various kingdoms and what not. However that's pretty much all this novel has to offer in my opinion. I wanted so desperately to like it, that I kept reading all the way up to 900 instead of dropping it earlier on like I wanted to. I'll list some of the moan things that personally really destroyed this novel for me. There's so much unnecessary garbage filler of side characters and mini arcs we just don't need. There just do happens to be another side character also from "earth" who already had his harem established before MC (lol), and then some random jojo memes thrown in which just threw off the pace. Wish Drake was never introduced anyways. Speaking of harem and r18 scenes in general, our mc doesn't start building until much deeper in the sorry which is fine I didn't mind the wait, that is until every other stupid side characters were given harems AND r18 scenes before the MV even got his first girl and even after the fact it is just absurd giving so much attention to these side characters when we are here for the MC. Examples: Drake Blackburn and his harem, Danius and his harem, Lucas and his harem, and so many other characters we (or at least I) don't care about at ALL. What was the final straw for me and really cause me to drop was around chapter 900 Logan fights Nora and of course they start to develop romantic feelings which I spoiled myself on (she is added to his harem). Imagine the whole reason they traveled to the Alstreim estate is to enact Claire's revenge on them and one of the main people behind her father's crippling and etc. Nora, who is then added to Claire's husband (Logan's) harem after they met for the first time and had a battle where he then "saves" her for some reason even though his supposedly love of his life hates her. Absolutely ridiculous, functionally makes no sense, and the final straw. In my sincere opinion, I would recommend you all to stay away from this novel and most importantly do not waste your time. I spent a few days getting to chapter 900 and I deeply regret it, however thanks for the ride stardust_breaker, even as unenjoyable as it was I have no doubt you will gain more experience and write a better novel in the future.
Divine Emperor of Death
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Bro you spoiled yourself for nora but yet you failed to consider the fact that she had ZERO to do with Claire being betrayed. Nora herself didn't even know about the plot herself it was so well planned out. on another note I would like to know what's a novel you would recommend (original only, 99% of translated are trash after 50 chapters)
I'm only 270 chapters in if what you say is true then I'm really not interested in going much further. I don't care to read about other characters that isn't the mc with what they have going on with the wives or lovers. Also don't get how his father the guy who was so into his mother not wanting other women now suddenly has this harem of women.
I have the same mindset as you my friend. Everything I said in my review is factually true, 100% (excluding opinions because opinions can't be true or false as everyone has their own opinions). That's why I made the review to save everyone's time after I wasted mine.
_Frost_:I'm only 270 chapters in if what you say is true then I'm really not interested in going much further. I don't care to read about other characters that isn't the mc with what they have going on with the wives or lovers. Also don't get how his father the guy who was so into his mother not wanting other women now suddenly has this harem of women.
The point of showing all the other harem was to change the MC's mind slowly. He was monogamous, and people just don't change just like that. MC saw how the world was and wanted to act like a denizen in it. You missed the point, but anyways, thanks for the review. And you were wrong about Nora and Logan because only she had started loving him. Not the other way around or both. I don't care if you care to retract that, but I said my piece. Thanks.
Mandeer:I have the same mindset as you my friend. Everything I said in my review is factually true, 100% (excluding opinions because opinions can't be true or false as everyone has their own opinions). That's why I made the review to save everyone's time after I wasted mine.
When you put it like that, I can see what your vision was regarding changing his view on monogamy by the people around him. Makes sense to me now, although I personally think it would have the same impact if the other harems for him to see were only restricted to around one or two other male side characters and less actual focus on then at that instead of the 16 different ones that popped up throughout the story. That's just me though I prefer the focus to remain on the MC and by extension his harem instead of all the other side characters. With the whole Nora and Logan thing even if it was as you said just Nora loving Logan and not the way around she was still added to his harem no and he accepted her? Even if some other reason was added after the fact like she didn't have anything to do with the situation or whatever at hand it still just doesn't make the beginning of their intercationale any sense to me. I know if I was in his situation and fought against Nora I definitely would not have helped her in any way shape or form anfter hearing all the suffering my wife had gone through because of her actions and etc. Regardless, I've already moved on and just wanted to put my opinions out there in case anyone else has the same mindset I do and can jump ship while they can and also if you find anything constructive about my thoughts you can incorporate in your future writing. This story wasn't it for me, but like I said I'm sure you will come out with better stories that might be more suited to my taste in the future and I look forward to that day.
Stardust_Breaker:The point of showing all the other harem was to change the MC's mind slowly. He was monogamous, and people just don't change just like that. MC saw how the world was and wanted to act like a denizen in it. You missed the point, but anyways, thanks for the review. And you were wrong about Nora and Logan because only she had started loving him. Not the other way around or both. I don't care if you care to retract that, but I said my piece. Thanks.
