Review Detail of God_Of_Books in MMORPG: The Elementalist
Review detail
Translation quality 4/5 Nothings Perfect in this world Stability of Updates 4/5 Nothing can remain stable in life let alone Mankind Story Development 1/5 CH.1 MC at Lv 35 No info B4 That at All Character Design 1/5 I Know Almost Nothing About Him at Ch 15 World Background 1/5 Again No info B4 Lv 35 besides him being in the woods. Also Ch 15 so far NO actual info on stats/class choices/skill info etc at all author just says what mc has and not what its Cd is mana cost nothing this is more like a wuxia/xinxia then a VRMMORPG then anything i have not even seen the mc stats sheet in 15 chapters mc killed a elite boss solo and didnt even gain 1 lvl author leaves out almost all Vrmmorpg game info so far at ch 15
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no problem lol i skimmed through chaps CH 1 he lvl 35 no info at all on anything stats wise, ch 28 we finally see his stats he is lvl 38 still no description on skills he has, what there affects are etc chapter 50 never saw his characters sheet again and still no info on his skillsm so i feel like we will almost never see his character sheet again let alone his skills info and sorry for the bad grammer XD i kept it in my library with hope of after like couple chaps it would turn into the vr we all know like Legendary moonligh sculptor , Over geared , etc but sadly nope.
Lightning_god:Thanks you put off this novel which sounded good and let my save my time. Thanks. No Sarcasm.
God_Of_Books:no problem lol i skimmed through chaps CH 1 he lvl 35 no info at all on anything stats wise, ch 28 we finally see his stats he is lvl 38 still no description on skills he has, what there affects are etc chapter 50 never saw his characters sheet again and still no info on his skillsm so i feel like we will almost never see his character sheet again let alone his skills info and sorry for the bad grammer XD i kept it in my library with hope of after like couple chaps it would turn into the vr we all know like Legendary moonligh sculptor , Over geared , etc but sadly nope.
A completely unfair review from someone who's too used to the usual web novel tropes. Story Development: Pretty nice, and the story starting at lvl 35 leaves us with little fluff chapters and more meat. Stories does not have to begin at the start. World Background: We slowly learn whats happening with no info dumps. Its called natural plot progression reading between the lines. Story: 4/5 Its not perfect, more western with eastern elements of writing. Review: 1/5 Probably never read a decent book in their life.
lol well i think its true i mean everyone will have problems in there life and for translators if there is a big problem that happens like getting in a accident then there may be delays in release and or book not getting enough views etc slow down translation pace so not really stable just consistent to a degree same with machines over time there is wear and tear eventually they will break and need to be fixed and the people that make and or fix things may not completely make it perfect or fix it all the way and it may not live up to its full warrenty etc XD just a point of view also im raging at this book because the lack of skill descriptions and the VERY rare vent of even seeing mc stat board and it starting mc at lvl 35 and skipped out on all basic info of a rpg game not that the sory cant be good just i came here for rpg but didnt get the full experience.
captainth:i like your comment a special mark for "stability" XD
First off: punctuation. Use it. It helps a lot. Secondly, there's a reason why the .hack anime series will always be better than SAO. They didn't have to start at the tutorial, or show the classes, the choices, or the stats and skills from the get-go. Like Silangan said, its called plot progression, and the blanks are there for the audience (in this case, us as readers) to fill in. Its a style of writing that engages the reader completely. Quite different from the typical info-dump MMORPG novels out there. You discover the world as you progress with the story - and that is a hallmark of a well written piece. I understand it may not be your (and apparently, most people on this site's) cup of tea, but paperback and hardbound novel readers are familiar with this kind of writing style. I guess that's why Silangan said you haven't read a decent book yet :(
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It has all the elements you mentioned... Just that they are not put forth as information dump or emotional drama of worst quality...
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It has all the elements you mentioned... Just that they are not put forth as information dump or emotional drama of worst quality...
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It has all the elements you mentioned... Just that they are not put forth as information dump or emotional drama of worst quality...
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It has all the elements you mentioned... Just that they are not put forth as information dump or emotional drama of worst quality...
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Silangan:A completely unfair review from someone who's too used to the usual web novel tropes. Story Development: Pretty nice, and the story starting at lvl 35 leaves us with little fluff chapters and more meat. Stories does not have to begin at the start. World Background: We slowly learn whats happening with no info dumps. Its called natural plot progression reading between the lines. Story: 4/5 Its not perfect, more western with eastern elements of writing. Review: 1/5 Probably never read a decent book in their life.
DaoOfPills:First off: punctuation. Use it. It helps a lot. Secondly, there's a reason why the .hack anime series will always be better than SAO. They didn't have to start at the tutorial, or show the classes, the choices, or the stats and skills from the get-go. Like Silangan said, its called plot progression, and the blanks are there for the audience (in this case, us as readers) to fill in. Its a style of writing that engages the reader completely. Quite different from the typical info-dump MMORPG novels out there. You discover the world as you progress with the story - and that is a hallmark of a well written piece. I understand it may not be your (and apparently, most people on this site's) cup of tea, but paperback and hardbound novel readers are familiar with this kind of writing style. I guess that's why Silangan said you haven't read a decent book yet :(
