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oscblade1yrPostedI only read 7 chapters it's not horrible but I would not say it's great. To enjoy it you have kind of turn your brain off at times. Some misinformation about wolves, time frame is messed up, at one point it seems like he was only born recently then he is almost 3 months old. A bit of nationalism thrown in. A cliche system is added. Worst of all wolves apparently roar in this story.
- oscblade1yrCommented
Wolves nodd their heads? I feel like this is one of those stories where you have to turn off your brain to truly enjoy the story. Puppy wolves are not even 3 months old going on a hunt, especially when it should be 6 months old. Wolves roar. Mc can still speak Chinese. They skipped the whole regurgitation of food for the pups.
When it approached the edge of the forest, Father Wolf stopped. It turned around and signaled to its children with its eyes. The two wolf brothers understood tacitly, and Su Ming and Su Hui also nodded. - oscblade1yrCommented
I don't think they are even 3 months old
Generally speaking, young wolves would follow the wolf pack out to learn hunting skills and wilderness survival skills when they were two to three months old. - oscblade1yrCommented
how? The mc's body is bigger and stronger there is no way the little pup could keep up.
About an hour later, it also successfully grasped the ability to jump. Moreover, it was becoming more and more proficient in running. It no longer needed Su Ming to slow down and could keep up with Su Ming. - oscblade1yrCommented
magic
Su Ming realized that his body had already become similar to a mid-sized dog, only a little shorter than his brother wolves at the entrance of the cave. - oscblade1yrCommented
I thought they had 3 days not two days of food
After a round of eating, the northern mountain goat in front of the wolves was finally eaten clean, leaving behind a pile of white bones. - oscblade1yrReplied to rurik_Aunimoto
I never knew that, but I saw another comment about that. I am also sure that the author could have done simple Google search to fact check and learn what to write but didn't.
Pfft! - oscblade1yrCommented
walking and running are two different activities
After walking for an entire three hours, he was still energetic and could not wait to carry out the next exercise. - oscblade1yrCommented
This must be like omniscient 3rd person point of view.
This was because the other party was not only a member of the wolf pack, but it was also the biological sister of this Mother Wolf. - oscblade1yrCommented
could have used the word scent
The eyes of the two female wolves lit up because they smelled a familiar smell. The main force of the wolf pack had returned. - oscblade1yrCommented
I wonder what his first clue was?
Looking at the scene in front of him, Su Ming realized that something was wrong. He did not expect a snow leopard to barge into the cave and even subdue one of the female wolves. - oscblade1yrCommented
got up slightly?
After a long time, he got up slightly and began to train slightly. Although he did not have the ability to walk yet, training his limbs would help him master his walking ability faster. - oscblade1yrCommented
That's all he has to do to evolve? kind of too simple, shouldn't he eat something specific or kill a certain amount of animals or something else
Absorbing the moonlight was not difficult for Su Ming at all. However, running and jumping were not things he could do now. - oscblade1yrReplied to algrife93
ya but the translator could use there common sense and correct stuff like this by reading context clues. Unless the translator is a native Chinese person who understands English.
"Roar!!" - oscblade1yrCommented
I believe it is 6 months
Although he had the wolves to provide food now, he would follow the wolves to hunt when he was three months old. At that time, he would have to rely on his own ability to eat as much as he could. - oscblade1yrReplied to cintaiCh 480 All of You Had No Idea About The Truth
- oscblade1yrReplied to BiscuitSandwichCh 480 All of You Had No Idea About The Truth
- oscblade1yrCommented
ya way too lazy
Succeeding through this tactic would be quite strenuous, and with how lazy Bu Fang was, he certainly did not wish to utilize this method. - oscblade1yrCommented
how is she going to beat him up? also even though there is a reason for his actions there is no reason for the mc allowing this to happen to his customers
"Nangong Wuque, if you don't give me a reasonable explication once we return, then don't blame for beating you up," Nangong Wuque angrily said, waving her fists to emphasize her point.