Review Detail of Lumi000 in Number One Dungeon Supplier

After reading over 500 chapters it is starting to lose my interest already. The story itself isnt bad but It just doesnt have that ability to make myself to want to read more that is why cliffhangers exist. Although overusing it is also bad, using too less of it also feels like u can stop anywhere. Maybe you need a proofreader or something that can help you? Idk just my opinion Tldr More major arcs and less or shorter minor arcs. Your buildup takes like 100 chaps of small arcs with mc out of the story but the finale is only 10 chaps which the mc also not doing much. The best part of the story imho is actually the parts where mc gets more powerful altho this is a shop type of story but at the same time it is a cultivation novel