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Lumi0002yrReplied to Hadyf_AddricCh 819 Chapter 819 Refining the 'Heavenly purity pill'- Lumi0002yrCommented
Home-Him
He saw that behind home were huge cliffs that spanned at least hundreds of meters, and surprisingly above them, he located a cottage there with a lovely garden around it. - Lumi0002yrPosted
Tbh it is kinda sad seeing everyone stopped reading after they saw megumin throwing an uncontrolled explosion in their way. For me the story kinda dips abit around chap 500-800. Even before the explosion it was starting to get stale and repetitive and it feels like it will take a long time to finish it. It might even be more than 1k chaps by then and it will definitely be like every other subpar cultivation novel. at around 500-800 the plot just isnt engaging enough especially the training arc. It is only when the war arc is starting that it feels like it has improved but the war arc still lost to the first war arc. Right after they ascend to the realm of gods tho, it was just like the moment when u first started reading this. It was refreshing and so much new stuff for Mc to explore/improve on. And also dont expect to read a New york’s time bestselling type of novel that uses alot of different vocabulary.
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"Praise the Lady!" Klein downed the last bit of his beverage. - Lumi0002yrReplied to Joao_Ribeiro_0872
Probably ascendent or smtg similar
''Master, above the Dao Emperor is the Sovereign realm!'' - Lumi0002yrCommentedCh 613 Chapter 613 Entering seclusion
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owo u finally decide to reveal the name instead of writing the realm above the dao emperor for countless times. Ps: your discord link in your profile has expired. LEMME IN!!!
''Master, above the Dao Emperor is the Sovereign realm!'' - Lumi0002yrReplied to Rishi_Varrey_0118
Yes i agree the story has a lot of plotholes. Maybe because he writes 12 hours a day that he is doesnt think that much when writing or maybe it is just a lack of a good editor. Maybe the author only proofread the story checking for grammar and spelling mistakes only and not so much on the logic of how the world works even if it is fiction.
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Scadenfreude- pleasure derived by someone from another person's misfortune.
Those who had been oppressed by those at the top and their cronies were filled with schadenfreude. In just two floors, Draco had acquired almost 1/10th of the total score of the top three. - Lumi0002yrCommented
Joker is just joker no matter if u imagine him like a clown or the joker from batman or hisoka from hxh Im too lazy to search a png of him just imagine joker as how u would with the description of author which looks like a crazy clown guy with formal clothes
(Authors note: Gentle Flower looks like this girl: https://imgur.com/XBSdKtK, Joker looks like Hisoka from HxH and his attire is similar to Dio Brando, Noble Soul looks like Asuma from Naruto and Happy Scholar looks like Assassin from F/SN) - Lumi0002yrCommented
Happy scholar
(Authors note: Gentle Flower looks like this girl: https://imgur.com/XBSdKtK, Joker looks like Hisoka from HxH and his attire is similar to Dio Brando, Noble Soul looks like Asuma from Naruto and Happy Scholar looks like Assassin from F/SN) - Lumi0002yrReplied to Lumi000
Noble soul
(Authors note: Gentle Flower looks like this girl: https://imgur.com/XBSdKtK, Joker looks like Hisoka from HxH and his attire is similar to Dio Brando, Noble Soul looks like Asuma from Naruto and Happy Scholar looks like Assassin from F/SN) - Lumi0002yrCommented(Authors note: Gentle Flower looks like this girl: https://imgur.com/XBSdKtK, Joker looks like Hisoka from HxH and his attire is similar to Dio Brando, Noble Soul looks like Asuma from Naruto and Happy Scholar looks like Assassin from F/SN)
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Gentle flower
(Authors note: Gentle Flower looks like this girl: https://imgur.com/XBSdKtK, Joker looks like Hisoka from HxH and his attire is similar to Dio Brando, Noble Soul looks like Asuma from Naruto and Happy Scholar looks like Assassin from F/SN) - Lumi0002yrReplied to BlackFlamer
Ok i pay u with a billion dollars in monopoly if u can make me
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Eiii another steven he fan
"As a young man aiming to become the God of Cooking, are you telling me that you can't take a little hardship? The road to becoming the God of Cooking isn't easy. Young man, you need to learn to endure hardships. The system thinks highly of you, work hard," the system seriously encouraged him, causing Bu Fang to be dumbfounded. - Lumi0002yrPosted
After reading over 500 chapters it is starting to lose my interest already. The story itself isnt bad but It just doesnt have that ability to make myself to want to read more that is why cliffhangers exist. Although overusing it is also bad, using too less of it also feels like u can stop anywhere. Maybe you need a proofreader or something that can help you? Idk just my opinion Tldr More major arcs and less or shorter minor arcs. Your buildup takes like 100 chaps of small arcs with mc out of the story but the finale is only 10 chaps which the mc also not doing much. The best part of the story imho is actually the parts where mc gets more powerful altho this is a shop type of story but at the same time it is a cultivation novel