Review Detail of WhiteChaosLethal in Rise of The Undead Legion

Your comment just made completely drop this book. Since he is supposed to be the futre Undead King he shouldnt even be in a relationship. I wanted him to be the MC of Solo Leveling. I swear i thought this book was gonna be unique but nah. This book is just a ordinary chinese novel with the same plot as other chinese game element game. Only with some difference. The difference is that he is a undead. That the only difference. No other difference.

Its not so easy to think of something that is unique and diferent from chinese novels, cause they write what the majority of readers want to read (like junk food- tasty, fast and in large quantities). And I myself am a picky reader cause I dont have a lot of time to spend reading a day, but I must say that I enjoyed the game elements UNTIL author started to play machmaking and insert unneeded drama IRL. That killed a lot of fun for me... + everything I wrote in my previous comment. But if one can ignore IRL events that happen and some chapters with dialogues between party members and- unneeded drama again- and THE almighty and Omniscient peanut gallery that is funny if used in moderation (but author uses them a little*1000 times too much...) ---- then you might enjoy this novel if VR gaming+insane luck is your thing. I am writing this because I want to give some credit and respect to the author (even if I couldnt finish this novel because of some of mistakes he did there and left me with a uncomfortable feeling in my chest every time I see the cover of this novel- and that is a first for me -> from that you can see how much I liked the novel and how much it disappointed me too)... afterall its not easy to write +500 chapters and plan a bunch of missions and stories for VR game setting that are not complete trash... PS. Give a like to the review ok? :D

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OK, so I think one of us (or both of us XD) really need to reread some passages. Since you admit that English isn't your first language, I assume that you might have misunderstood something. And that misunderstanding seems to go a long way. So first of all, let me first clarify for you that there are 2 female characters which you seem to have mixed up. There is Caitlin Giovanni aka Mercy. She is the girl who had been in the car which had the accident. Her dad's goons were the ones who have shortchanged the MC, yet neither she nor her dad knew about it, until Dave accused them of that, when he refused to meet with them. She IS NOT THE LOVE INTEREST OF THE MC!!! (Sry but this really needs to be stressed) And at no point in time should you have gotten the feeling that she might have been. Then there is Zoe Silvana aka Lone Arrow. She is the streamer girl, the first one who Dave helped as Mr. Skeletal. She is the Love Interest, which was pretty much a given going by the good old formula of 1st girl = main girl / only girl (in non-harem) Now that this is established, what happened was that during the, I think it was a reunion party for Zoe or some sort of party at least, Dave (MC), Ralph (best friend) Zoe (MC love interest), Caitlin (Ralph love interest) and Vanessa (interested in MC) ALL got shit drunk and wake up in hotel rooms. The whole scene was meant as a slap stick situation, with the main joke being that Ralph woke Zoe up, by hitting her on her bum, because he drunkenly mistook her for Dave. It was just supposed to be some drunk humor. Caitlin even told Vanessa that she was naked, not because she had snu-snu'd Dave, but because she liked to sleep in the nude. At no point in time was it ever intended that Ralph and Zoe had anything going. Ralph has been established as a true friend of the MC, who would never gun for his girl, (not to mention he was/is interested in Caitlin) So if you suspect any NTR between the two of them, then sorry but that one is on you. Anyway, this whole rant was basically me telling you, that you sir, seem to have misunderstood something, and if you liked the novel so far, you should probably continue reading it, especially now that it has concluded :)

What did I misunderstand? (plus I am not so bad at english as you make me sound in your comment- I am just lazy to write everything with 100% correct grammar- reading and understanding is easy as breathing for me- so dont try to emphasize in the wrong way what I mentioned about english) I was reading normaly and mentioned what i didnt like in what author did there. The things that I read couldnt have been an illusion- and I just disliked authors way of making stupid drama and how he dumped one of girls to his friend (why make something desirable and then just throw it away?) I dont think I am the one who misunderstands something here.

I did not mean to belittle your english as your review and your reply show you to be quite literate. As to your question, the misunderstanding, at least from my point of view, is you deciding that Mercy at any point in time was ever supposed to be a love interest. From my POV she was pretty much an instrument to get the story going, (this novel's version of Truck-san XD), but then she got her own role. During their first meeting, in the game, it was pretty clear that Dave didn't want to have anything to do with her, although as you pointed out that was mostly due to the initial misunderstanding. Still, at the point they actually meet IRL, it's painfully obvious that Dave is head over heels into Zoe. Ralph even tells as much to Vanessa when the two of them talk. It's great for you that like Harems (personally I find that in most cases they are handled horrendoulsy), but what made you think that this was a Harem story? There is no such tag indicating that and given Dave's past it wouldn't really fit his character. Another misunderstanding is the already mentioned sleeping in hotel rooms. Caitlin was the only one to actually be nude. Heck the chapter itself even called it "but it had to be a slapstick comedy of misunderstandings that only happened in 80s sitcoms and stupid romantic-comedy movies."

Wait... wait wait! You don't like mc getting ntr but you can tolerate it if the mc ntr someone instead? Furthermore, how could that be considered ntr if they are not even officially together yet? I never understand how people like you(who enjoy harem) think. Thanks god this is not a harem story. I will instantly drop it otherwise.

welp that saved my day... wanted to start reading a complete original webnovel but if there is this netorase vibe then m out of it.... even as a joke it is bad for my heart, m the one who only enjoys Netori after all~ ALL HAIL NETORI LOVERS!

that's simple... I mean most of the people think of themselves as mc before reading a novel.... By assuming themselves as mc I mean they would just think what would they do if they were in the same situation as mc. this explains why people enjoy NTRI. I mean I would enjoy cucking other people after all lolololololol. Sadly I ain't kiba 🥺 and secondly, just imagine your love interest/crush, who also interacts with you in a way you know she loves you, just woke up with some other guy that too with your best friend... would you really be like 'oh yeah that's fine, i think nothing happened between them'? no way! even if mc doesn't show on his face he should still be depressed! welp i am just free enough to rant and bored enough to read any other novel so here I am replying 🤣🤣🤣

100% agree about the ntr garbage. Completely unnecessary and ruined the novel. Given the personalities of those 2, it seems pretty likely that something happened between them. You don't just wake up in the same bed after being blackout drunk and assume nothing happened...The more the romance stuff comes up, the more disgusted I am with the novel. I'm honestly pretty sad about that since it was a good novel if you could just remove those parts. And as time goes on, I keep questioning why Zoe would even be interested in him romantically.

BRUH WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT!? first of i read 500 ch of this and there was NO ntr... if your talking about the drunk scene they DID NOT do any thing mercy wasn't mc love interest EVER and about his best friend well... he mistook his friends lover with hes friend because he was drunk, they accidently went to wrong rooms and accidently slaped her but because he does that with his homie THATS ALL. BECAUSE OF YOU many readers dropped this and we missed a chance to recruit new members of THE LEGION you're a HERETIC!!!

M8 u do relise that in solo leveling mc has a girlfriend and they have a kid right?

Were those half-ntr things (that left a bad aftertaste) a significant and important part of the story? No, they were not- but they spoiled all of the story for me... it was impossible to continue and not think of what happened... (da^^mn my good memory and imagination😂) And I think I saved some of the readers- because time is precious.

the legion is disgusted at you fleshlings and your feeble bodies that can't stand the test of time, u can take your precious time and shove it we're not doing anything significant whith it and frankly these novels are just timewasters that we consume to satisfy ourselfs........also

Haha- nice...

This just screams insescurity and its kind of a weird review. A love interest is someone who loves the MC and the MC loves them back. From what I'm reading he wasn't even in a love relationship with either of them... So how is it NTR? Like female characters that interact with the MC can't fall in love with other characters instead of the MC? It's just kind of a weird take man idk...

Yeah idk thats always been weird to me. People who ignore Men Cheating and get so offended by women cheating. Both NTR and Reverse NTR are pretty sad things, since its both being unfaithful. People who don't see that are hypocritical to the max.

Yeah, ofc it's weird if it happened in real life. The deal is- this is a novel and if the novel is all about fighting and the only romance is monogamous, then I expect every important side character to be male or ugly or "ok" female. But when the author introduces in length with important background story a super-sexy female, then my male lizard brain already wanted her in the harem- but then author just dumps her to the best friend guy and describes even further how cute she is on dates with the male that is not MC... If I want to read something realistic then there is a bunch of biography and other things. On this site I want to relax and feel good- cause RL is hard sometimes and I have only few (if I am lucky) hours free in a day to read something relaxing... and this went from exiting to "my stomach hurts" experience... Others might like it like I liked it 200 chapters, but now...

I suppose one dimensional characters that exist only for the mc is rather relaxing, you get to turn off your brain and not use any critical thinking skills while reading. I personally like developed characters, makes me care about them and the choice they make. It's weird how fiction is becoming a puppet word for the mc(readers) to become god and bang every girl that moves.