Review Detail of Tom_The_Tom in The Mech Touch

Dropped at early 4000s I reluctantly forgave the “war arc” due to the fact that everything leading up to that point was great. 9/10 leading up to that point the 2/10 everything after. In retrospect, I should have dropped it before the war arc started because everything kinda crashed after that. The flaws that I’ve been ignoring in the novel became even more apparent. 1. MC being a vain little asshat. ”I can choose to disappear but I expect everyone to welcome me with a party when I come back” 2. The sudden shift away from being a system heavy novel. Which is a bold and interesting move that could have been a great opportunity for character development but was then VERY poorly executed. 3. Gloriana. Maybe she has some magic hypnotizing/addictive pussy juice which Ves bends over 720 degrees for but she’s just batshit crazy. Think Amber Heard mixed with Ted Bundy but x10 crazy. Probably 90% of the reason I’m dropping this novel. Sad really. There’s a deep wish within me that wishes the author would rewrite the story from the war arc… and then add a scene where Gloriana gets shot 827 and a 1/2 times with a shotgun and then dropping whatever’s left of her in a vat hydrochloric acid then launching said vat into a dying star then said star will immediately explode into a beautiful supernova.