Review Detail of djumbo in The Mech Touch

4000 Ch+ One of my favorite novels. World building 5 Mech/tech concepts 5 Flow in story 5(once you accept it is 10k long) Ves Pre Gloriana 5 Ves Post Gloriana -1 When I read this I feel like ves has become some sub in a fen,dom fan fiction novel. Reading the novel at this moment is like a toxic/abusive relationship I can't end. Gloriana. does more harm than good to the novel. *Spoiler* 20% good since he isn't a 40 year old vir.g. 80% bad since she sucks. She just sucks. 1) She doesn't care about him at all. 2) She is using him like a gold digger and he loves it. 3)She stalks him and uses her power to abuse him until he is okay with her watching him 24/7 4) She tell's his secrets to other people since she thinks his opinion are trash. 5) Her ability is trash and irreverent at this point. Her concept has evolved into a worse version of his, but does speed up the process, 6) She has trained him like a dog/lab mouse with chemicals and psychology. For example He gets to the point where he has to breathe in her perfume to get through the day. It is not love, but straight addiction. She had it created in a lab with his dna as focus to attract him. 7) Prior to his mother she would have kidnapped him and forced him to work as a slave. This is not focused since his mother exists, but the fact she considers it is hypocritical of the other chick. They are the exact same. Just kil her off and I would rate it 4.2 instead 3) She has been around, but won't let him pre relationship. She