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I love reading light novels

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  • forbidden1
    forbidden15mth
    Replied to GuSannBR

    and they give XP even if it's a small amount every bit counts

    As he was heading deeper, he avoided the monsters he came across. He didn't want to waste time with them as they weren't valuable to him anymore except for their mana cores. He would get back for them later after he hunts the other species, though.
    Level Up Legacy
    Fantasy · MellowGuy
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  • forbidden1
    forbidden16mth
    Commented

    average teen male girth is roughly 32 inches the snake dwarfs them so let's say it's 40 inches so here we have a 4 ft 11 snake That's 3 ft 4 in wide... That is one fat snake

    Following the trail of skirmishes in the hopes of encountering civilization, Arthur finally confronted his inaugural opponent. Before him lay a horned snake, its girth dwarfing his own and measuring approximately 1.5 meters in length.
    Level Up Legacy
    Fantasy · MellowGuy
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  • forbidden1
    forbidden11yr
    Commented

    in your notes here you said that one essence equals a copy but in chapter 131 he only takes the one goblin essence and yet when he enters the goblin village no one recognizes their former leader you might want to edit that

    Ch 548 Chapter 548 - Zeal
    The Last Primal
    Fantasy · Shaele
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  • forbidden1
    forbidden11yr
    Commented

    if that's the case then you need to go back and edit chapter 131 because you plainly state that he got all the essence he needed from the one goblin and yet when he enters the goblin village no one recognizes him

    (A.N.: 'Small' note here just to clarify a few things. Normally when a Primal absorbs a creature he only takes some amount of its life essence (vitality if you will) for himself. In most cases, a single absorption would not yield the Primal with the form of the defeated, but instead, several more would be required. In the end, when finally the new form of the accumulated creatures would be created, the appearance would be generalized, by assimilating the dominant traits from the 'pool'. In Aiden's case, due to some specific factors, this process was skipped this time, and he gained the form from a single attempt, thus his appearance completely matches the elderly skinks. If he were to absorb more of the same creatures and deliberately assimilate their life essences, his appearance WILL change, reaching a more perfected, 'higher' state gradually. 
    The Last Primal
    Fantasy · Shaele
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  • forbidden1
    forbidden12yr
    Commented

    so she got pregnant at 11 and had the baby at 12. 🤔

    After another six months of careful screening, nine of the eleven available apartments were gradually rented. I personally interviewed the aspirant tenants and accepted only those that had family members in my strike zone, the more the better. To ensure that they would agree, I even sought ways to offer special discounts so as to make the apartments more appealing. For example, in one unit lives a thirty-year-old single mom with an eighteen-year-old daughter. I spewed a lie that I grew up alone with my mom as well and so I can sympathize with the difficulties she is facing, and offered her a 30% discount on the rent, no deposit, and the possibility to owe up to two months without issues if she faces a tough period. Of course, the woman was ecstatic, especially since I made sure to build the complex in an area that is quite close to four different schools. Another such case is a couple with 3 daughters, all in my strike zone, and so on.
    Perverted Daddy System
    Realistic · PinkCulture
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  • forbidden1
    forbidden12yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 38 Burying The Hatchet
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • forbidden1
    forbidden12yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

    Ch 27 Breeding Ground
    The Dawn of the New World
    Eastern · Shinigami8671
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  • forbidden1
    forbidden12yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

    Ch 27 Breeding Ground
    The Dawn of the New World
    Eastern · Shinigami8671
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  • forbidden1
    forbidden12yr
    Posted

    I read a lot of books on web novel and this one was a total surprise was looking for a book that had over 400 chapters and had a steady update found this one by chance started reading it and I haven't been able to put it down the main character is relatable the story is very interesting the world is well developed all in all a great read I highly recommend it

    The Dawn of the New World
    Eastern · Shinigami8671
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  • forbidden1
    forbidden12yr
    Commented

    he got himself a pair of Jordans 😉

    The speed enhancement give is normal, the reason I brought this artifact because it offers high stability in the air, so If it is perfect for taking sky jumps.
    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • forbidden1
    forbidden13yr
    Replied to torpino

    DON'T DRINK THE KOOL AID!!!

    The topic wasn't to everyone's appetite, but even Ben had to admit it was a powerful speech that attracted each person's attention. 'Scumbag Steve over there has a way with words. This must be how those poison punch cult leaders get their start…'
    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • forbidden1
    forbidden13yr
    Commented

    Gotta get them gains!

    After reviewing his progress, Ben was pumped up. He decided to go to the gym. Even though his Multiplier had expired, he tasted the sweet gains and wanted more even if it took much longer. He also knew that getting fit didn't mean he would stay that way if he did nothing. A good body still needed maintenance. Besides, Ben's new fitness goals were still far away.
    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • forbidden1
    forbidden13yr
    Commented

    At this point I'm enjoying this more because of how atrociously inaccurate the author is

    A reindeer leaped out from the forest. Madman's wrist shook a little and revealed a short blade hidden in his sleeve and rushed over with extreme speed.
    Super Gene Optimization Fluid
    Sci-fi · 9 lightyears per second
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  • forbidden1
    forbidden13yr
    Replied to aceapprentice145

    His other novel galactic dark net was really good imo

    Xia Fei shook his head. "The H2 is too small. Do you have the Ford F650?"
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    Sci-fi · 9 lightyears per second
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  • forbidden1
    forbidden13yr
    Commented

    I find it funny that he is "obviously" a fan just because he is wearing a baseball hat. I wear ball caps all the time not a huge fan.

    As soon as they arrived, a youth wearing a New York Yankees cap was walking out with a smile. Baseball was America's most popular sport, and there were plenty of fans, this person was obviously a baseball fan.
    Super Gene Optimization Fluid
    Sci-fi · 9 lightyears per second
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  • forbidden1
    forbidden13yr
    Replied to aedwards_120

    I was thinking pancakes

    "Excuse me, give me another three portions of the same food and two plates of fruits and salad. Can you bring more of these small round bread too?" Xia Fei ate and spoke at the same time.
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    Sci-fi · 9 lightyears per second
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