TheOldOne
Just a fan of good stories
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velkana in monster Hunter world iceborn
nah, they are the guardian of it and the créature is just the mort powerfull force user ever seen
i agree for the forest part...but they are eleven y.o. or twelve maybe so a peck on the cheek is narural at that age
gravity manipulation
gravity manipulation
star wars training drone maybe
it's à fitting place to be dor MC
I really like the story, great work
Please think carrfully before chosing harem or not. A harem is a very hard thing to write because it add a heavy load on the story-telling. In this case, if tonilia go with him on his trip, you would have two "main" characters to portray, describe and write. You will have all the other character of the world you are in to use. Now if you make a harem the load will increase each time more. Maybe a fling in the other world or an open relationship between tonilia and mc could do the trick without adding too much load as the other lover/fling/thingy would stay in their world. I post that because i love your story, the characters seems alive, the story is rich and the quality is good. You have a good pathing and a power scaling OP without affevting the quality of the story. It would be sas to see à drop in quality just for a harem. I care for your book therefore i'm expressing my fears.