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TheOldOne

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  • TheOldOne
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    Replied to Vixdraconen

    velkana in monster Hunter world iceborn

    'The ice created by waterbending is way tougher and resistant…It would be a good powerup if I can seamlessly use it.'
    Water Bending In Marvel
    Movies · lazarus898
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    Replied to DaoistPCowBD
    (I know many people might not like this chapter since it seems the mc is making outrageous demands to someone who is a big leader and expects to get everything from this guy but trust me when I say that he knows what he is doing...so trust the process and enjoy)
    Water Bending In Marvel
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  • TheOldOne
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    Enel, considered invincible due to his Logia powers, had never before been bested in such a manner.
    One Piece: Ragnarok
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  • TheOldOne
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    Commented

    well, here i am, still waiting for a sign My will is strong and i can wait

    Ch 17 Quick Announcement
    Althera: The Homunculus
    Games · Solus
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  • TheOldOne
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    Replied to I_Am_Death

    nah, they are the guardian of it and the créature is just the mort powerfull force user ever seen

    So me meditating in this way and connecting to the Force is unprecedented and new, resulting in it almost rejecting the idea and pushing me out like this. But that's alright with me. I can tell that the Force is like a wild animal. Untamed and free. It is not sentient, but there is a form of will that the Force has. 
    The Immortal in Star Wars
    Anime & Comics · DaoistRUH792
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  • TheOldOne
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    Replied to Feebling

    i agree for the forest part...but they are eleven y.o. or twelve maybe so a peck on the cheek is narural at that age

    The soft lips came up suddenly and brushed his cheek.
    The Strongest Dark Lord
    Movies · Mysteryon
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  • TheOldOne
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    Replied to MarinXGrayfia

    gravity manipulation

    {Congratulations on getting the Template of Issho, Fujitora.}
    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · Hkj
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  • TheOldOne
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    gravity manipulation

    {Congratulations on getting the Template of Issho, Fujitora.}
    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · Hkj
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  • TheOldOne
    TheOldOne1yr
    Replied to Chaosking24

    star wars training drone maybe

    Hermione especially was interested in my form of battle movement, as I did not stay in one spot, constantly shifting around the room I used for battle practice. One of the first things I did when I fashioned the room I used here at Grimmauld was to make a few training spheres, similar to a certain classic movie that is beloved by many.
    HP: Werewolf? I prefer Worgen
    Book&Literature · 0DarkWolf0
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  • TheOldOne
    TheOldOne1yr
    Commented

    it's à fitting place to be dor MC

    8: Bloodborne.
    A Soulsborne's Traveler System
    Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
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  • TheOldOne
    TheOldOne1yr
    Commented

    +1

    1 Non-Harem
    I AM IN FICTION?!!
    Video Games · ZED_LOGINTHAN
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  • TheOldOne
    TheOldOne1yr
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    My Chaos Academia: Brotherhood (MHA/BNHA)
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  • TheOldOne
    TheOldOne1yr
    Commented

    Welcome back

    Ch 45 Chapter 45 – Umm... Monkey!
    Reborn as Thor!
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  • TheOldOne
    TheOldOne2yr
    Commented

    Druidique calamity

    Ch 15 (Hidden Class Voting)
    Yggdrasil: Worsap (Overlord FF)
    Anime & Comics · FoxSpy
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  • TheOldOne
    TheOldOne2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 18 Chapter 18: Talking to Nami
    One Piece: Guardian Angel
    Anime & Comics · Smol_frog
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  • TheOldOne
    TheOldOne2yr
    Commented

    Shani

    Ch 19 Oxenfurt
    The Witcher: Living in the Continent with Scarlet Rot Ability
    Video Games · mark_kiple
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  • TheOldOne
    TheOldOne2yr
    Replied to Caio_Bernardo

    It was better, but i saw some places with missing words or wrong words Opérable it's quitte good

    Ch 14 The Fucking Good Masters
    Game of Thrones: Dovahkiin
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  • TheOldOne
    TheOldOne2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter, it was a good filler, it added subtance to the main charcater and to the story. Great work autor

    Ch 13 A Filler chapter ( sorry about that)
    Game of Thrones: Dovahkiin
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  • TheOldOne
    TheOldOne2yr
    Commented

    I really like the story, great work

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    The Witcher: Living in the Continent with Scarlet Rot Ability
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  • TheOldOne
    TheOldOne2yr
    Commented

    Please think carrfully before chosing harem or not. A harem is a very hard thing to write because it add a heavy load on the story-telling. In this case, if tonilia go with him on his trip, you would have two "main" characters to portray, describe and write. You will have all the other character of the world you are in to use. Now if you make a harem the load will increase each time more. Maybe a fling in the other world or an open relationship between tonilia and mc could do the trick without adding too much load as the other lover/fling/thingy would stay in their world. I post that because i love your story, the characters seems alive, the story is rich and the quality is good. You have a good pathing and a power scaling OP without affevting the quality of the story. It would be sas to see à drop in quality just for a harem. I care for your book therefore i'm expressing my fears.

    Ch 41 Unlocked, Another Talk
    Grand Sorcerer in the Omniverse
    Anime & Comics · Reddsaint
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