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TheOldOne29dReplied to Vixdraconenvelkana in monster Hunter world iceborn
'The ice created by waterbending is way tougher and resistant…It would be a good powerup if I can seamlessly use it.'- TheOldOne29dReplied to DaoistPCowBD(I know many people might not like this chapter since it seems the mc is making outrageous demands to someone who is a big leader and expects to get everything from this guy but trust me when I say that he knows what he is doing...so trust the process and enjoy)
- TheOldOne1mthReplied to Brent_6064Enel, considered invincible due to his Logia powers, had never before been bested in such a manner.
- TheOldOne1mthCommentedCh 17 Quick Announcement
- TheOldOne2mthReplied to I_Am_Death
nah, they are the guardian of it and the créature is just the mort powerfull force user ever seen
So me meditating in this way and connecting to the Force is unprecedented and new, resulting in it almost rejecting the idea and pushing me out like this. But that's alright with me. I can tell that the Force is like a wild animal. Untamed and free. It is not sentient, but there is a form of will that the Force has. - TheOldOne5mthReplied to Feebling
i agree for the forest part...but they are eleven y.o. or twelve maybe so a peck on the cheek is narural at that age
The soft lips came up suddenly and brushed his cheek. - TheOldOne6mthReplied to MarinXGrayfia
gravity manipulation
{Congratulations on getting the Template of Issho, Fujitora.} - TheOldOne6mthReplied to
gravity manipulation
{Congratulations on getting the Template of Issho, Fujitora.} - TheOldOne1yrReplied to Chaosking24
star wars training drone maybe
Hermione especially was interested in my form of battle movement, as I did not stay in one spot, constantly shifting around the room I used for battle practice. One of the first things I did when I fashioned the room I used here at Grimmauld was to make a few training spheres, similar to a certain classic movie that is beloved by many. - TheOldOne1yrCommented
it's à fitting place to be dor MC
8: Bloodborne. - TheOldOne1yrCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
- TheOldOne1yrCommentedCh 45 Chapter 45 – Umm... Monkey!
- TheOldOne2yrCommentedCh 15 (Hidden Class Voting)
- TheOldOne2yrCommentedCh 18 Chapter 18: Talking to Nami
- TheOldOne2yrCommentedCh 19 Oxenfurt
- TheOldOne2yrReplied to Caio_BernardoCh 14 The Fucking Good Masters
- TheOldOne2yrCommented
I really like the story, great work
This chapter has been deleted. - TheOldOne2yrCommented
Please think carrfully before chosing harem or not. A harem is a very hard thing to write because it add a heavy load on the story-telling. In this case, if tonilia go with him on his trip, you would have two "main" characters to portray, describe and write. You will have all the other character of the world you are in to use. Now if you make a harem the load will increase each time more. Maybe a fling in the other world or an open relationship between tonilia and mc could do the trick without adding too much load as the other lover/fling/thingy would stay in their world. I post that because i love your story, the characters seems alive, the story is rich and the quality is good. You have a good pathing and a power scaling OP without affevting the quality of the story. It would be sas to see à drop in quality just for a harem. I care for your book therefore i'm expressing my fears.
Ch 41 Unlocked, Another Talk