The story is good.... but the synopsis doesn't really match with this. I thought he was going to be a peaceful farmer away from the strife... yet 18 chapters in and he's already fighting for his life. doesn't seem to match the synopsis at all. I mean going into town with alot of loot when a war is about to break out.... what did you expect?

Yeah.... I came here for a good baseball story, not this cheap Chinese knockoff blackmail. disappointing .

The end of the training arc was even more of a disappointment. That's where I stopped at.

This is such a bad chapter. Flaws everywhere.... Knew this whole training area arc was gonna be a massive disappointment .

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Everything about this novel is top tier except for the incoming nerf. If you can tolerate such things, then it's a great read. The system is not around alot but it's one of those series where the system gives quests and you get punished for falling it. To make matters even worst, the Mc got punished for failing a cooperative quest, and it wasn't even his fault they failed. To make even worst again... his talent got nerf for this failure. His natural talent from his body, and not any actual gift that the system gave was nerf...

Such an interesting novel ruined by the usual stupid nerf. Oh well at least I won't be wasting anymore resources on this story now.

These chapters could be so much better. This whole controversy with the refs is a horrible plot point. These system quests with failure consequences is typically something universally hated .

Well written but horrendous MC with plot holes galore. First 10 chapters are pretty awesome and interesting, but 11+ the story suddenly changes into a grim dark style that makes no sense.

Way to forced. Definitely did the Clefable wrong, just to add drama and probably a free cleffa. Really good and exciting story up to get, but gonna have to stop now.

The story been going way downhill since the rebellion. So many decisions just didn't make sense. He did everything in the rebellion and wasted away his life just to bend the knee? when he already had the greatest city in the world. This was like the culmination of it all, think the story is unreadable now.

Man really don't like it when you write about ash and team rocket. All the interactions come through feeling extremely stupid especially the way Ash acts and treats everything. To make it worst, you add in Erika and I just completely question the logic behind alot of the decision. Why run into a potential team rocket base alone? just doesn't make sense. If ash did it alone I could blame his young master syndrome for it... but Erika is part of her league. Why didn't she at least call someone to give a warning or ask for back up?.....

Man what a make let down. Clones of any sorts always ruins a book. To many things and the story tends to spiral out of control. I thought we avoided the whole clones situation, now you randomly give him a Clone power from the op system that could have been anything. What a letdown.

These last few chapters seem so cringey and forced. Like this is now just beyond oblivious and dumb. Really hard to read, and losing alot of interest cause of it.

oh god.... not clones . clones universally kill all novels. things are never the same afterwards.

His system is based on karma. There's no reason to stockpile money if he ain't gonna use it. Always a cause and effect. Steal from the evil rich and they will do worse things to get more money or it'll effect the ppl working for them. So unless he becomes a full time vigilante and go after them as well, probably not worth it for the effort and time required to be meaningful for karma.

Chapters are getting extremely bad and repetitive. identical paragraphs back to back, probably due to using ai.

You can also notice certain paragraphs repeating itself with the same content, but in different style.

Hidden gem pokemon story. op Mc with aura focus long chapters 100+ chapters

Disappointing . Petrel seems to ALWAYS escape in every pokemon story no matter how big an advantage the Mc has. No one ever brave enough to completely change canon.