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if he's in his twenties and she's in her thirties then she's not really an auntie.... at least to him.... unless if she's just literal aunt
I can't say that he's a super famous person that literally captured some of the most powerful people in the world for no reason at all..... let's cause problems for absolutely no reason.... That's what good writing is right????
I think it's confusing to use body refinement for the stage and technique ....like "he's only at the body refinement stage" but didn't know he was doing body refinement".... see how confusing that is ???
this feels really forced..... Even if you want to be low key if you could just upgrade one level it isn't that big of a deal.... you will ask him more resources and more protection.... hell the fact that some rando could try and kill him just because of a so-called insult also feel stupid.....
you need to remember that it's a gas powered vehicle and basically the spirit stone is transforming and converting the energy before using it..... so at its core it's naturally not very efficient because it's not a device meant to use spirit stones.....
why does he need to lie and pretend to be at the second level???? so that more people target him and that he'll have more danger???? like if his cultivation level was mysteriously high that would be one thing.... but if he was at the third or fourth level he just be considered a bit of a threat and maybe a little talented but that's it....
I think it's just to show how untalented our MC is.... he should spend several years just to get to the third level and the fourth level.... meaning he has no talent at all for cultivation.... That's why there are so many older people at the fourth level and unable to go beyond....
he should have already have been at the fourth level a while ago.... also let's not forget the fact that he never needed to actually hide when he broke through to the third level.... that level itself isn't that strange....
He should just make a trade he helps her go through her tribulation and she becomes his dao companion
tao and dao are the same thing