Did the MCs name change from Ryan to lain???

This is a solid novel, well cut above the rest. Grammar is great with a good flow. The story is reminiscent of more traditional fantasy novel, where there is one grand quest (currently) and along the journey adversaries, companions, and new revelations come and go. You actually do have to read thoroughly rather than skim or you'll get lost pretty quickly. It's been a great read 50 chapters in. Give it a try.

The story is cliche sure, but compared to other stories on this site it'd definitely not a 2/5. Story is a decent read to anyone reading this reviews comments. Give it a shot.

Not as good as people make it out to be. Still suffers from typical Chinese cliches. Everyone is dumb, rigid, and hot headed only to make the MC look smart. Only real thing it has going for it is that there are moments when it's funny but that's about it. Read it for the laughs (?) not the story.

Brain rot. You can write a smut or r18 story without having a perverse and unlikeable Mc to this degree. Disgusting. Akkikan really needs to work on using different personalities for their mcs

Author says without unnecessary drama and a light-hearted tale and then proceeds to do the opposite. MC is very unlikeable. Even if you are young to immediately start sexualizing everyone you meet is weird. Romance with the OC was forced and abrupt. This girl apparently falls in love with him for his looks and he starts sexually harassing her and she reciprocates? Because he's handsome? Stupid reason. Creating a character with no self-respect is not good writing. Then it's revealed that she plotted ways to get close to him because she's a heiress and then drama ensues cause the MC starts feeling insecure? Do note that this was in a span of back to back chapters, in a small time frame. Honestly the story was okay and seemed to be a fun read. If only the MC was a lot less perverse and was more modest. More buildup to the story and rather than incorporating a random OC why not use more of the original cast. You know, what people read fanfictions for, the OGs not the OCs.

The first impressions of the story were so bad that I find it hard to continue. The character so far has been inconsistent. He wished for three things, ABSOLUTE LUCK, healthy body immune of illness or disease, and UNSHAKEABLE WILLPOWER. Next chapter he spawns next to honkai chickens is chased and almost killed. Now this wouldn't be so bad, luck works in different ways and it led him to one of the main characters of the setting. But what's ridiculous is for someone with UNSHAKEABLE WILLPOWER, he's an absolute wuss. Here's exact quotes: "Noooooo ... stay away ... stay away please..." "Nooooo!!!" Ryusuke screamed as he covered his face with his arms and closed his eyes already anticipating the worst Not exactly unshakeable willpower. Worst of all the next chapter he all of a sudden turns in Gilgamesh and starts calling everyone mongrels. The author has absolutely no idea what he's doing. The story also starts within a 'flashback' or future so to speak where a lot of things have already transpired and then all of a sudden it switches back to the past and continues from there? Why not just start from here altogether. Nothing interesting even happened in the 'prologue' so I don't see why it's a necessity. Stories beginning is a mess.

What a silly plan.

Also there's excessive use of text emojis. Like ^_^ or // O_O //. Disgusting.

God I thought this would be a decent read but as always, it suffers from Chinese syndrome. 15 years is spent as a robot and then all of a sudden he gains 'consciousness' and then proceeds to tell Clark, 'Hey, I went into hibernation for the past 15 years but I'm all better now!' Like that wouldn't raise any suspicions. Also, the worst and most grave mistake the translator or author made is naming a Saiyan ROBERT. Fucking Robert the Saiyan.

If you are curious. Chapter 32 is when they officially transmigrate. Worthwhile wait.

Honestly one of the better Overlord novels. Writing Quality is great, don't know why it says translation quality in the fanfic section but that's typical webnovel/Qidian for you. Still hasn't reached new world but I'm exciting for what's next. Especially considering the astronomical buff Tensura gives out.

You clearly have the ideas for a story, now you just got to get in down on paper. No matter how bad you think you are, there's always improvements to be made, as little as you perceive it to be is miles away from your previous state. If you want something similar to your 'idea' Fate: I Will Eventually Become the Hero of Justice

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Sure. Your opinion is entirely your own and I can't take that from you. Doesn't change the fact that this review and other reviews you make are 🗑🗑🗑

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I apologize. I forgot webnovel readers are bots who five star anything and everything. Sorry for any accusations

tldr: Mid and personally below average fan fic. It's high rating is deceiving, it does not match it's rating score. What a catastrophic first chapter. I was curious why the MC would choose Owari no seraph as his world of choice aside from the whims of the author but the introduction was so terrible that it does not fit the 4.94 rating this story has. Either the author is deleting one star reviews or the story got much better later on but I doubt it. The story is rushed, so the choices of the MC though from an empathetic view makes sense, to readers it's abrupt and stupid. Especially the fact that he gained his memories 8 years after he 'reincarnated' but then needed another 4 years to active the functions of his system just so there could be needless drama with saving his sister??? The kicker here is, after forcing the system to activate he has to wait an additional 4 years meaning it would only be after 8 years that he'd have full functionality. Talk about forced. You might as well have time skipped all of this non-sense and start where you wanted the main story to be set with flashbacks or monologues of what happened in the past four years. Or leave it as a mystery until later on. Very poorly handled.