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Review Detail of Woshi in As a Kasuga Arata in Multiverse

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Woshi
WoshiLv51mthWoshi

tldr: Mid and personally below average fan fic. It's high rating is deceiving, it does not match it's rating score. What a catastrophic first chapter. I was curious why the MC would choose Owari no seraph as his world of choice aside from the whims of the author but the introduction was so terrible that it does not fit the 4.94 rating this story has. Either the author is deleting one star reviews or the story got much better later on but I doubt it. The story is rushed, so the choices of the MC though from an empathetic view makes sense, to readers it's abrupt and stupid. Especially the fact that he gained his memories 8 years after he 'reincarnated' but then needed another 4 years to active the functions of his system just so there could be needless drama with saving his sister??? The kicker here is, after forcing the system to activate he has to wait an additional 4 years meaning it would only be after 8 years that he'd have full functionality. Talk about forced. You might as well have time skipped all of this non-sense and start where you wanted the main story to be set with flashbacks or monologues of what happened in the past four years. Or leave it as a mystery until later on. Very poorly handled.

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As a Kasuga Arata in Multiverse

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Woshi
WoshiLv5Woshi

I apologize. I forgot webnovel readers are bots who five star anything and everything. Sorry for any accusations