I've never understood why FF authors have so much trouble getting their hermione/s to learn occlumency (For the ones who bother anyways) It's like they don't know anything about her character and it's easily done with info she would jump at like 1- great/perfect memory and emotional control 2- your own mental library with memories and books you've read all it take is studying and meditation

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Violence is not the answer... ... Lol X10

4 slurs in this chapter alone And all 'said' by a character with a black best friend Super out of character

I got up to chapter 19 When a really ooc racial slur popped up No idea if its the author or translators fault but yea... It's okay I was just kinda going through it on a lazy day but meh

I would say it wasn't 🐲Dragon🐉 enough haha I would prefer 🐲Dragon🐉 chapters But I'm happy with what we get and hope this book goes for a 🐲Dragon🐉 time

Is the chant for summoning (starry dragon in this case) needed Maybe it helps slightly Or is Mc cringe ? No flame just wondering Thanks for the chapter

Ignore the scrubs man Anyway you look at it black canary 'cry' is just discount black bolt whisper haha Just more people who feel the world owes them something Love the FF so far keep it up

He saw someone reacting to the bomb Not setting it off or setting it up And even if in the movie he did see something last second In this FF the Mc didn't he was blind sided

I mean ... It's a bomb the "intent" is either miles away with the switch or on a timer set hours ago lol

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While you're right and I agree with you Let's not forget that time travel is a thing he does it was even mentioned in this chapter that he can just go back to like a minute after he left so even if he picks up a couple more responsibilities he's not actually losing out on all this time he's spending on other worlds

It's a shame i have to end you now I found some great stories through you And if you're not helping me find kindling to throw into the unending fire that is my reading addiction when you're hindering my progress as a leech of society Jk good luck with life and I'll look forward to updates

I see and agree with what you're saying but....

while I'm 100% on for harmony otp lol I had the same opinion until I was reminded by someone that everyone remembers movie Ron But book Ron was a decent person and added to the story Movie Ron makes me enjoy reading some more Weasley bashing

I think the first mistake all of them made was not checking the PDA to check *all* the options .... for all they knew there was a hidden option at the end of the list to say click this to win and they just missed it lol

I've been trying to give the author benefit of the doubt for the last 4 or 5 chapters but why is MC all of a sudden buddy buddy with his mother? didn't she ignore him for being "trash" just like everyone else and with his sister and his brother's maid was actively aggressive but it's not like the mother did anything to help