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Honestly it's good that you got rid of it, but instead of Grindelwald, you could've made some fate-like encounter with a god or sth, maybe death not liking the weapon itself. Grindelwald, while stronger for sure, still shouldn't have come close to stopping this. I think you're massively raising power levels for both dumbs and grinder if you leave it like this?
These are the facts from previous paragraphs: -He has a twin brother. -He can't remember his brother's face. -He has an older brother and a little brother. -He has a good memory and can remember something like 1 yr 2 mnth 1 wk 3 days. (Quite a few contradictions in paragraphs above author bro, maybe take a look, but dw I'll keep going) And of course fire nation attacks. <3
btw, you can try using chatgpt for this maybe? E.g. write what you want him to say, and ask gpt to make some kind of rhyme with it.Modern solutions đ
I couldn't figure out whether you were translating or creating your own story with the pace you are going at, but whatever it is - I love your consistency and quality!I don't have any suggestion really, love everything so far, just wanted to let you know đđ
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I lost too many braincells already:3 adios
It's a pretty nice read, much better than it's current rating. I usually give a try to any novel with decent grammar(this one qualifies). As with any fan-fic, you always have to close one eye on some details - author's touch, but up to this point(ch ~90) it's rather enjoyable for me. Keep up the good work author!
Ethan Hunt?
Ink is also a physical object, due to that in theory it should be able to be scanned - same way as echolocation works, only on a really really small scaleI'm pretty sure human hands can't feel it unless under some special circumstances I guess
I'm not sure if you already came up with the sound spell idea(you probably did) - but how about a mini-scale sonar scanning spell which can scan book pages while Ginny is holding the book?
You're writing this story on your own, people can & always will comment, sometimes good and sometimes bad stuff. But like in life, it's your choice what to do of it, imho - just keep at it. You obviously have a knack for it, wouldn't have gotten this far otherwise. P.S. The last chapter was pretty obvious though, I don't think you need to simplify it further, could ruin the charm. Happy brainstorming
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Can respect this. Literally can't remember any other chinese mc's name other than Linley, from Coiling Dragon. That's how much it's cherished from my side.
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Just try to get back to your regular routine, extras are for special occasions. This one's cool though