stay safe, but where you at?

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it was an iIteresting read at first but there is no structure to it and it gets very confusing, it isn't worth the time iIspend trying to read it,unfortunately. the premise was intriguing but the writing wasn't.

a really interesting concept of an enlightened harry potter and an abusive dumbledork which iIlove. the concept is intriguing and I look forward to the future updates

how can celestial bronze kill Gabe if it can't kill mortals?

I haven't read the full book yet but the synopsis and the first few chapters looks great, as long as it updates continuously it will be a great read it will be a good book. and has anyone else realised the authors name? pseudonym, it game me a good laugh, thanks

a very novel and interesting concept, with a well written story. the premise is very intriguing. i look forward to the updates, and hopefully it wont be dropped.

single all the way my man

no, please don't do this.

an interesting concept with great potential, but i would love more updates. i judt hope the authour does not drop it as would be greatly disappointed, i look forward to future updates.

Molly and Arthur, like the weasleys.

Is this the loading screen from assassins creed when he was ezio?

just informing you, there is no snow, or sun in england, only rain.

Thanks for the chapter, a very good read, but just a question, didn't the status tell him that he incorporated the stone into his body and it gave him boosts, so why is he still searching for the stone?

a harry potter and marvel cross over would be interesting to say the least

a well written story and an intruiguing concept for the idea behind it, people often dont give enough importance to the physical aspect of magic, wether it be for dueling or as a vessel to hold more magic, and combining it with G.Arrow is interesting to say the least, i look forward to the future updates, good work author

a well written story and an intruiguing concept for the idea behind it, i look forward to the future updates, good work author

well written, an amazing idea that hasnt been butchered, and does not give me a headache tying to read it, i applaud you author, for the concept is intriguing, i hope to see you continue this story

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Continue he is not a pawn but a master of his own destiny, the premise of the story is intriguing, and well thought out, do not pay attention to these comments, but a couple peices of advice, don't make the harem too big (max of 3 or 4) as it will lose the good effect of romance, and maybe an editor once the story progresses, as I'm sure it will.... I good luck and I look forward to your future updates, gambate