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I have already said about good things in this story in comments
wow the first chapter gives clearly the Mc's and his world background even finding finding a fault is impossible as a writer,I feel myself ashamed that I have many things to learn as writer thank you
I like this story which consists of all the elememts which would pirck the readers curious so it is best comic which is one in the lifetime
you will think like this I know but as the story moving you will see the great work of mine
this story is improved by further more characters and it's based in normal fantasy world so it would be better for amateur readers