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  • Marokal
    Marokal4d
    Commented

    When are the next chapters coming??

    Ch 148 The Train Waits for No One
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  • Marokal
    Marokal11d
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    How to donate though?

    Ch 148 The Train Waits for No One
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  • Marokal
    Marokal21d
    Commented

    Keep it going please! Always reading yours and then SS!

    Ch 148 The Train Waits for No One
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  • Marokal
    Marokal26d
    Commented

    Please add her rank of aspect and some more details about her memories. Maybe in the same way guilty does? Good work!

    Ch 138 Refugees
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  • Marokal
    Marokal1mth
    Commented

    Very nice! Do you talk with guilty about interactions with Sunny and background story or do you just go as you want?

    Ch 107 A Very Special Chair
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  • Marokal
    Marokal1mth
    Commented

    Hey! You are doing great! I think you already improved your writing skills a lot. Greatly appreciated!! Like it a lot and looking forward to reading your story every day, so keep it up, please cause iam counting on you.

    Ch 100 A Golden Opportunity
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  • Marokal
    Marokal1mth
    Commented

    I really like your fanfiction but if you want to take constructive criticism. The dialogues are sometimes a little off, like two persons wouldn't talk like that to each other. Apart from that, great work :)

    Ch 87 Waiting is the Hardest
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  • Marokal
    Marokal1mth
    Commented

    Good story! Well done and keep it going, please!

    Ch 82 A Race Against Time
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  • Marokal
    Marokal1mth
    Posted

    Nice side story of Shadow slave. Can't have enough lore! Rain's mother is quite an interesting character as well. Some adventures into the dream realm would be great! Keep it going, please!

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