Hey! You are doing great!
I think you already improved your writing skills a lot.
Greatly appreciated!!
Like it a lot and looking forward to reading your story every day, so keep it up, please cause iam counting on you.
I really like your fanfiction but if you want to take constructive criticism.
The dialogues are sometimes a little off, like two persons wouldn't talk like that to each other.
Apart from that, great work :)
Nice side story of Shadow slave.
Can't have enough lore!
Rain's mother is quite an interesting character as well.
Some adventures into the dream realm would be great!
Keep it going, please!