Yeah its very illogical unless fake/survived.

Since when Dobby speaks "i"??? He always used 3rd person.

I ignore all the "me", "your" and other such errors. But what's with the names? Shouldn't it be nargles and wrackspurts???

Reverse harem? Sort of atleast, weird. Hopefully no harem in new world, harems suck! Or are you not writing this anymore? oO Also she is John Snow? I am vaguely sure it was him born in tower. So... ~

This is impossible to understand. When is he talking, when thinking? What is even going on??? Forget it... dropped......

Did you confuse vanishing with disillusion or something? One erases and other merely makes it invisible like in this chapter oO

I am glad someone else noticed this. Makes no sense, was about to comment on it.

OMG what a confusing chapter! Jon, Aegon, Harry... use surnames or better descriptions! I dont even understand who was in this chapter!

Oh nooo where is author? No chapter, no comment anywhere for two years... This is a great story and its even a chain of stories. Come back~!

Good story! Now for game of thrones.... :>

Is this dropped? A shame, not many novels in db with fl that are good...

Wasnt this scene originally with Ayanokoji? With him missing in those chapters it feels weird.....

Its coach. Couch is what you sit on.

Richard Castle...? As a dark arts defence teacher? How does that even make sense, a man child from awesome tv show. Funny and stuff. I would fit him as Gryfindor Head House, he only fits there really...

Quite an Alternate Universe, you even put Klaus Mickelson from Originals in here lol. And all the gods and everything around, its barely HP at this point.

Quite a huge logical flaw: He is reincarnated and has his old memories. Yet he found a soul and his musings are about memories being in brain not soul, but now he has this research so its a discovery?

With this translation those sentences are hardly difficult, Dumbledore being pro-muggle would absolutely get all of it... Picturing him as idiot fails miserably lile this. Also bone marrow? How exactly did he get it? Does original author even understands the procedure? Not a word of hospital wing?

The duel with Grindelwald was in 1945 and in movie he was rather young with brown hair. And now few years later he is grey with long beard? How does that work? Also since i am already commenting, i feel like reading chinese novel *winkwink* with mc discovering something and gasping... despite knowing it and talking about it few chapters prior.....

Plane parked in the air and lowered rope? What is this, its 1940's! Translation is gutted quite often... atleast its readable though, so kudos for that.

Haha. Two pairs of boots equipped at once? How does that even work??? 🤣