Jeet_1993
Its nice to meet you all. I am a noob writer but still writing for my passion. Please take care of me :)
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Jeet_19933dReplied to SailfishCh 1 Little Introduction before we start ?- Jeet_19936dCommentedCh 52 CHAPTER 52 - Fragment of the lost past.
- Jeet_19936dCommented**BOOOOOOOOOMMMMM!!!!**
- Jeet_19936dCommented*BANG! BANG! BANG!*
- Jeet_19937dReplied to 0Eitan0
ah i see. its a pity webnovel doesnt have edit on comments. i half guessed it was something like that.
Arjun felt his heart sink with the troubling news. Just moments ago, he had literally died while saving a girl, and now, in the afterlife, he found himself in a forced situation to fight for unknown reasons. - Jeet_19937dReplied to 0Eitan0
all opinions are welcome, u can go wild, i dont mind.☺️ i suggest u add those types of gifs, it was interesting to be honest and i also get the idea how my readers felt. i understand that all might not be in my favor but i will appreciate the honest fb so that i can improve further.😊👍
Inwardly, Bairam Khan cursed , "Had it not been for your foolish treaty, she might still be alive. You brought it to yourself brat." - Jeet_19937dReplied to 0Eitan0
lol, i got it . yes , your reasoning is very good, but here he is not completely manipulated yet, coz he is powerless now. after the treaty he was held hostage and bairam khan is no ordinary maid, he had the situation under control which will be revealed later but you find out a good flaw that this response is very lame to get riled up, even with the emotional outburst. i should have given a convincing response for slack of defense or afzals inner turmoil. thx for the feedback, i will re edit it and put a label on redit on title and will also put a notice on author section at later date. thx for the extra effort and i would like more of such comments ahead. [img=recommend]
"We grew complacent, blinded by false assurances of peace, and in our negligence, we have paid a heavy price." - Jeet_19937dReplied to 0Eitan0
sorry, I dont understand this comment, does it means that the lie is obvious ? , please reply for feedback, so that i may put an additional note here to not let readers go wrong line . here he is actually shedding crocodile tears. u will know later chapters that he is the main culprit behind the death of afzal's mother and more . thanks for reading..☺️
"We grew complacent, blinded by false assurances of peace, and in our negligence, we have paid a heavy price." - Jeet_19937dReplied to 0Eitan0
cant lie he is. I tried to give him a twisted personality which is more emotional than rational. u r the first one to point out. good observation.👍
Inwardly, Bairam Khan cursed , "Had it not been for your foolish treaty, she might still be alive. You brought it to yourself brat." - Jeet_19937dReplied to 0Eitan0
lol, I appreciate your passion, but how can she become a girl when she is already a girl? 😊 hm it seems there is mistype and its a pity wn doesn't give edit for comment. nvm.
Arjun felt his heart sink with the troubling news. Just moments ago, he had literally died while saving a girl, and now, in the afterlife, he found himself in a forced situation to fight for unknown reasons. - Jeet_199312dCommentedCh 81 Holding the Ground Part-2
- Jeet_199313dCommentedCh 1 Announcement
- Jeet_199314dCommentedCh 75 Prince Pratap from Mewar Part -1
- Jeet_199317dCommentedCh 51 CHAPTER 51- Purgatory.
- Jeet_199318dCommented
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On the right side of Viswa, there was a young man named Mithun Reddy who seemed to be in his early 20s. He had a mustache, jet-black eyes, and neatly tied-up long hair. He appeared to be fit as well. Viswa explained that Mithun belonged to the influential Noble Reddy Family in the Crown Prince's Faction. However, he was kicked out of the family after his mother passed away due to an illness. The reason for his expulsion was that he was the son of a mistress. Currently, Mithun was working odd jobs to survive in the capital. - Jeet_199319dReplied to Any_Dhdk
ur zeroes went, beyond measurements.☺️
Turning to the assembled craftsmen, he posed a question that had been weighing on his mind."How do you all take unit measurements for accomplishing these masterpieces?" he inquired, eager to learn more about the process behind their creations.