lol

if its badly written it absolutley deserves one star. just because you call it "experimental" doesnt abolish any criticisms against it. Im sure the crapload of bad sonic fanfics are also "experimental" but that doesnt mean theyre not shit. It just means you cant take criticism. Your whole plot and au worldbuilding is done in a way that is just forced plot armor to justify your personal viewpoints, and good writers dont need to use plot armor to justify something that doesnt make sense in their writing

just because you force an au plot to back your viewpoint doesnt mean its not inherently flawed and illogical. Also good writers dont need to force a plot with plot armor to justify their viewpoints. At that point its just propaganda for the author's viewpoint

this story still inherently doesnt make sense. and "oh people like othersl stuff" doesnt invalidate the fact the got is popular because of its realism. and making things grimderp because oh "darker is realistic" is a bad writing move and will just make a story unpopular.

they absolutley deserve one star

lol author even has a copy and paste response to criticism, clearly the man is too far gone

novel started good but then ended up becoming totally unrealistic with the mc becoming a slaver. the wholr of the north would have gone to war against him like they did mormont for it. and his excuse irls totally flimsy and illogical. abd the north would defintely not accept him bringing all the wildlings south. its also extremely unrealistic for someone from our reality thst is not a serial killer or rapist to go from normal person to oooh rape is totally fine now. its not even like a gradual descent thing its just treated like something written by a 14 year old to be "edgy"

so this is decent but it seriously needs you to go back over these earlier chapters and ficlx them. theres so much mussing words and bad grammar its honestly unreadable. loiking ahead to the latest chapters, you definitely get better, so you need to go over these earlier chapters and fix them up.

this is extremely hard to read. full of spelling and grammar mistakes. author needs to go over everything and fix it. also the intro is really offputting reading like a deviantart 14 year old edgy fanfic, which isnt great. if youre going to write a fanfic with a system you should use ghost in the city as an example.

yeah the cloak is dumn

well to be fair with concrete and giants and dwarves itd be waaaay faster than the great wall of china, but probably not as fast as modern equipment, but id imagine probably not too far off sooooo like 5 years?

this seriously needs more descriptiveness along with longer chapters, right now its more of an outline than a story

honestly the only real bad choices were the difficulty and charisma dump stat with the dufficulty actually being a good gamble that just didnt work out well as it gave him stuff he could get anyways from big mt

honestly while ingame it works if it was real dumpstats are critical character flaws, but if you had done all 5s with a 10 or maybe 2 4s and 2 8s you could build those uo to be real good across the board, but a 1 charisma is gonna be extremely hard to bump up to being a strength, as at 1 it shpuld be a crippling flaw

though the 8 luck should offset some but not all of the misunderstandings. like there would definetly be social misunderstandings, but like with 8 luck maybe half or slightly over half of em would be resolved without too much bloodshed. but like any kind of diplomacy is gonna fail hard

well I hope you realistically have the stats affect the character, because with his stats of agility endurance and perception being 8 or higher, hes basically the terminator mixed with an eldar in endurance and grace, with an average athelete's strength, but with his dump stat of charisma being 1 he should also be the ugliest man alive that gives off creeper vibes while having the social awareness of a severe autistic person. that can be fixed of course, but if its gonna be a real world fallout isekai you should have gone for 5s across with a 10 stat in intelligence or endurance, though id go for intelligence, as thats gonna affect everything to some extent

i can tell youre an assohle irl

found the bigot

wow youre a fuckin retard, whered youre tard wranglers go, they must have forgotten about this obvious social reject that doesnt even understand how to use sarcasm. great job at acting like youre a person

wait doesnt a lover die in the elf and human reincarnate ones