this is extremely hard to read. full of spelling and grammar mistakes. author needs to go over everything and fix it. also the intro is really offputting reading like a deviantart 14 year old edgy fanfic, which isnt great. if youre going to write a fanfic with a system you should use ghost in the city as an example.
Liked it!
LIKEDarkGamerZ:you read NTR and simp mc chill man we all know you have no real merit to give reviews lol
DarkGamerZ:you read NTR and simp mc chill man we all know you have no real merit to give reviews lol