In between party vibes the element of star gaze and northern skies was pretty perfect and well complimented.

The Ironman metaphor is cool though. The revelation too.

Coherence is up to mark . The openness and bond between Erica and Rene's character is quite warming. Good going 👍 Regards K.

Several times reading this chapter gave me goosebumps, the dialogues and introduction of new characters especially Rene kinda obsessive one, amazing plotline ✨ keep going buddy! Regards K

That's an awesome plot and storyline. Its something everyone desires to have conversation with robots and the same between robots. Loved this chapter as well. Regards K.

The depiction of emotions followed by robotics introduction and technical arena , comparing different countries, giving the environmental suggestions the plot from starting to end of the chapter is coherent. Amazing 👏 best wishes from K.

The dialectical addition in between paragraphs is nice and catches the attention often.

Hey! K this side. The storyline, inculcation of various aspects from digi to green cities (added environmental pov), the chakra and aura( spiritual aspect), the depiction of obsession via characters ( triggered human psychology ) .... read the initials, it was awesome. Soon give it an entire read and comeback for the new comments or i would say compliment :) . Thank you .