Tftc! Always happy to see an update!

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Naruko's first word being "Dattebayo" is the funniest thing I have ever read. Was legitimately expecting her to call Ren Dada, but her being able to have her first word being her verbal tic is fantastic!

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I'm sensing some protagonist level bs coming soon😂😂😂

Snape and Dumby never learn, do they?

Right after I read that last line in my head, I can't help but imaging him sounding like Captain Kuchiki😂😂😂

Nice, he got his new book finished! I bet Professor McGonagall is going to hunt him down soon!🤣🤣🤣 I almost wonder if he'll "accidentally" find a way to give her her youth back. Didn't she use a time turner too many times or something?🤔🤔🤔

Good chapter as always. Shame about Hermione though, she's about to mess up. Oh well, she'll learn eventually!

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It's really interesting how stupid Harry is being here. I mean, I get it, you want to keep things the same, but there are different experiences happening around you, and there's more at stake here than what you realize. PLUS, you're about to become a footnote in someone else's story, all because you wanted to rekindle old alliances? Harry, you've already got Dumbledore and Snape breathing down your neck from your dark magic enhancements, while Orion is about to become a friggin pure magical colossus compared to you. Sit down boi, there's a new hero in Hogwarts. Oh, and Hermione? You done goofed, girl. I hope you come to your senses ASAP, because I'd honestly hate to see you mess up with Orion. Granted, Daphne and Rose are better romance options imo, but I'd rather have the Golden Girls be a trio instead of a duo whenever they do pair up with Star Child Orion. GET BENT, NICK!

This is really good so far, I hope you make an update to this story soon! I never saw the original story, so I'm exited to see where this one goes!