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Yup that's what I am talking about having sukuna power doesn't make you sukuna his powers are pretty simple it is he who makes them this good meanwhile gojo has the most broken power in his verse having it will make you invincible regardless of how good you are at using it.
Honestly this fic is very underwhelming. While the grammar is decent the quality of writing itself is pretty mediocre. The interactions between people and the dialogues are very bland and uninteresting, the man hating goddess having a crush on him after a short interaction its just a classic case of making other characters dumb to make the mc look good. His training arc is the most disappointing thing ever i feel like you gave absolutely no thoughts into it" he was fighting a tiger and their fists collided" really? Then few months later he was training against tiger,bear and an eagle AN EAGLE seriously?He is influenced by sukuna and has violent nature yet he feels attraction towards women? This is literally just an edgy mc. The whole fic altogether is extremely fast paced.
You know I always prefer if authors remove the bs about someone dying by a mistake of some higher entity and then the entity in question going to a great length to even compensate the mc who is like an ant to them.it would be better if first chapter starts with mc already being in other world
Since when did liking your own comment equaled fragile ego? So you got so butthurt from a negative review that you tried to search up dirt on me lmao this is what is called a fragile ego. Honestly I am unable to see which of my comments have been deleted so I don't know what you are talking about since this is the only web novel account i have you can make any assumption you want to not like my words will change your mind. And about the "R",you didn't mention it in words sure but your mc is tecnically a grown ass man and he mentioned how he "tore through her hymen" when she tried to seduce/tease him when they were in middle school he is not just a "R" pist but also a "pdf file".
Well where should I start. The story was sort of meh the interaction between everyone were too fast paced and bland. The mc quickly became a gary stu somehow gaining political,social and financial power that should not even be possible to achive within 2 years even if he has supernatural powers. While I appreciate that it is not one of those fics where the GC has no other male other than the mc I would have appreciated if most of the GC members were a bit more recognisable people I don't know the Chinese guys at all. This fic sort of feels like the dollar store version of that one akikan fic(the one with the GC).
It would be greatly appreciated if author of such fics will get to the point instantly instead of including a whole cliche chapter about a supposed omnipotent god who can casually grant you power to become outer versal making mistakes of not knowing how the mc's soul got lost and then even bothering to apologize by granting mc the power to destroy timeline of a whole universe and multiple souls. This story is as cliche as it can get.
5 chapters in and the interaction between the GC members is as bland and meaningless as it can get for ex: none of the members freak out with the appearance of GC they just kinda accept it almost instantly the author doesn't know how to write interactions so he just outright offscreen the chat most of the time.
His reasoning were just speculations not something that is canon in dxd the reason supernatural hides from human is because faith from humans provides extra power to gods and and dream energy that great red feeds on. They are not hiding from humans because they are scared of human potential because the strongest humans,human magicians, government heads and many random humans already know of them and work with them. Humans in dxd absolutely don't pose any threat to them and canonically humans were so weak and at odds against the supernatural that God has to create sacred gears for them to be valid in the game.