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drunken angel sick of their own skin

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  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chap

    Ch 38 Forest [1]
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 37 Smile [3]
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    Oh, makes sense. I cut myself in front of a teacher so that my parents will notice me. I relate to you my glorious king😈😤✊

    'So that my parents for once... would care about me.' 
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    nga what

    '.....I smoked because I wanted cancer.' 
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    PEAKK

    Ch 33 Progression Analysis [4]
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
    detail
  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    ORV reference

    My one and only companion. 
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    tftc

    Ch 32 Progression Analysis [3]
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 31 Progression Analysis [2]
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1 Prologue [1]
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Posted

    This is my second review ! I just caught up and I'm so glad I read this. Even though it has a small amount of chapters at the moment, the scenes, character interactions, build-up are perfect. I actually quite like Aoife and Julien's interactions. I've gotten pass the weird halts in paragraphs, and I actually quite enjoy it now. I did say that it was a sad attempt at suspense but the more I read, the more I feel that I am proven wrong. The plot is well done and I can tell the author has big plans for it in the future. The protagonist is well written. He has a personality and not quite like the self insert ones. He's humorous and vulnerable which is a perfect mix. Though it is obvious that is not like the original Julien. Julien's progressions is always a painful read. Not because it's crap but rather because I sympathize with him. It must be insanely painful to experience others' severe emotions. Even I couldn't handle emotions such as grievance. That's it for now. I'll keep up with this novel as much as I can (Every two weeks, I mean lol. I like to stockpile a bit.) I do wonder though if this novel is contracted.

    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    thank you for the chapter

    Ch 30 Progression Analysis [1]
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
    detail
  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    Perhaps it is missing the word "time?" Making it, "I don't have time to clean up." It still works, technically but seeing the context, the latter fits more

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  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    Thank you for the chapter

    Ch 17 Mirror Dimension [2]
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    Wonderful pacing

    Ch 15 The Weakest Black Star [3]
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Replied to Entrail_JI

    It's all good. It doesn't make your novel any less of value

    Ch 11 Vision [1]
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
    detail
  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Replied to Entrail_JI

    Ah, alright. I'm used to western writing styles so I found it out of place.

    Ch 11 Vision [1]
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    Good chapter.

    Ch 14 The Weakest Black Star [2]
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    Better to use a comma here rather than a period. One shouldn't use a linking verb on the beginning of a sentence.

    She shone brightly wherever she went. Was always the spotlight. 
    Advent of the Three Calamities
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  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    It's rather odd that a lot of paragraphs are barely whole sentences.

    Ch 11 Vision [1]
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
    detail
  • drunken_angel
    drunken_angel3mth
    Commented

    Good Lord. Please fix these weird halts

    Closely observing me. 
    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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