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i dont know about updating stability or world background because this is just starting same with story development But story start is really bad. i think i cant get passed ch 2 Author gonna add some bullshit like they love him but make fun of so he cant get bully or something) and add them to his harem ( when fiance and sister really calling him trash and he just like yes they love me in inside ) pathetic MC Author if you read this review please answer my question - 1. make them regret their actions and get harder to get into his harem pls punish them in some way is this gonna this route or something if not then sorry I really like your previous novels but this novel is really leave bad test.
and i know in the end he will not be able to cripple them or elder will interfere if this happen then its simple author fault in writing. Why this should not happen- 1. The clan is strict and respect strong.If elder interfere by breaking rule then elder have to be punished severely. 2. Oliver is strong then his value increase over his elder brother amd sister.
I don't know about update stability. Question for author - 1. How much time will it take to catch up to your previous chapter 2. Please add more romance between his women because after every protagonist there should be some slice of life or romance between MC and his women.This is my request for rewrite because I felt there is too little in your previous work