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TheOnlyGreedy14dReplied to RoadtoLifeYes, I know. ¡Thanks for Reading!
Although his situation generated some pity deep inside me, there wasn't much I could do, I'm just another orphan left by the Kyubi's attack, besides, with everything one can hear from adults, just befriending him would leave a mark on me that I wouldn't want, let alone in this period, where I'm still a child.- TheOnlyGreedy14dReplied to XzDanielzXCh 4 Chapter 4
- TheOnlyGreedy17dReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139Ch 3 Chapter 3
- TheOnlyGreedy17dReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139Ch 3 Chapter 3
- TheOnlyGreedy17dReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139Ch 3 Chapter 3
- TheOnlyGreedy17dReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139Ch 3 Chapter 3
- TheOnlyGreedy18dReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139Ch 2 Chapter 2
- TheOnlyGreedy18dReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139Ch 2 Chapter 2
- TheOnlyGreedy19dReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139Ch 2 Chapter 2
- TheOnlyGreedy20dReplied to Abdul_Rahman_5112
It's not a bad option, but there is limited information about the place, so the best option in this case is Konoha.
I could have appeared in any of the other 5 ninja villages, but I was fortunate to appear in one of the best in terms of progress and "Security", I do not know if it was luck or decision of that God, but I am grateful. Compared to other villages like Sunagakure or Kirigakure, Konoha is the best option for someone like me, even with a catastrophic event like the Kyubi attack, the village was able to stay stable in a way... - TheOnlyGreedy4mthReplied to Lord_QuimeraCh 2 Chapter 2: "A favor"
- TheOnlyGreedy4mthReplied to CCAAPP
Hahaha, I love Jojo's, but this history need... ¡Drama!
I went blank, it felt a little... I don't know. I'm not saying Jojo's Bizarre Adventure is a bad manga, quite the contrary, but to have waited two years to be able to do this... it felt a bit anticlimactic. - TheOnlyGreedy4mthReplied to Gabriel_Gomes_4775
- TheOnlyGreedy4mthReplied to IP_MAN
Re-reading your review, yes, I forgot to mention the reason why the protagonist despite coming from a rich family, because he is poor? This is all the more reason to create a chapter that deals with the protagonist's arrival in his new world. Don't take this comment the wrong way, on this point, you're right to some extent.
- TheOnlyGreedy4mthReplied to IP_MAN
As the author of this fanfic, I kindly ask that you reconsider your review. I'm not saying I'm closed to bad reviews, but if the review isn't really justified, then I'm afraid I'll delete it (probably not). Regarding the review, and responding to your complaints, I kindly ask you to read the fanfic again, I know I'm not a native English speaker, but at least I can say that the words written in it are understandable. I even mention it in the chapter I even mention it in chapter 1, The protagonist receives his "Golden Finger" when he is 18 years old, the time span from when he obtained the system to the current time is only 2 years. The reason I don't recreate manga from its other world is because... Who would remember something you saw 18 years ago... In a lifetime it happens... The only really good thing I can take away from this review is that you gave me a reason to write a side chapter, and another chapter that explains in more detail the MC's arrival in his new world.
- TheOnlyGreedy4mthReplied to Rey_PercyCh 3 Chapter 3: "Sakurasou"
- TheOnlyGreedy4mthReplied to Rey_Percy
Vaya, me sorprende que alguien de habla hispana esté leyendo este fanfic, bueno, yo también soy de habla hispana. Respondiendo a tu pregunta, si, si pondré una meta de piedras de poder o algo parecido, de hecho se suponia que está historia se publique la siguiente semana (Me refiero a partir del capítulo 1) Es por eso que no le tome demasiada importancia a la historia, recientemente acabo de volver a mi país, por que volveré a escribir. Volviendo a responder tu pregunta, si, si pondré una meta de piedras de poder, pero lo haré para el siguiente capítulo (Se públicará martes), aunque siento que lo mejor sería publicar la meta de piedras de poder para la siguiente semana, en este momento no tengo ningún capítulo escrito.
Ch 3 Chapter 3: "Sakurasou"