his personality is getting really annoying now for someone who constantly got torture and beat up at home you would think he would have control over his emotions to not snap at the person who just saved you, i don’t like how this situation ended overall it was an ok arc instead of him training to not be people punching bag we got club activies with uneeded slife of life moments that really didn’t move the story forward at all btw this will probably go on into like the chapter 200s so if you don’t want to see him just get beat up by everyone and get stepped on(don’t blame you) then it’s best to drop it’s to many things holding this series back from being great at this moment is still feels like we have an masochist type of mc with no emotional control maybe it will finally pick up next arc or it won’t at all who knows 5/10 the highs and the lows are pretty much equaled out the highest peak and the lowest of the low part of this arc are basically neck and neck

the story start going down hill the moment he was basically her tag along and how the 3 rulers wanted her kill cause she had the power to kill them “easily” her being this person who can easily defeat the 3 strongest in the universe was just dumb and they never really cared about him that much him being a tag along was just stupid like all this time she was the special one and he just happened to get caught in her mess? lmao his half of his journey gets negated off that also they took way to long to confirm they feelings for each other don’t get me started on the paragon shit that was extremely dumb i still don’t know why i stayed after that i guess cause i had a certain curiosity

i don’t think so 15 guards rushing at him at once is some amateur stuff this most likely a faceslapping moment (hopefully)

fiancé problems again i hope this character is actually good the way she is getting portrayed this is will be his 3rd conflict involving his fiancé in the last 15 or so chapters, weapon arc, soccer, and now cooking club it will be extremely disappointing if she’s just the perfect herione who knows every detail about him them characters usually turn out to be the worse

she’s adorable lol

no when he first met her his aunt bella was a live so it wasn’t her

honestly it’s great writing i like the mc it’s also realistic with the girls with dms i don’t want him to be the best at everything only just with his songs and singing i think this is one of them novels that deserves a lot of credit as you can see it’s already doing well this is your best work yet undoubtedly hopefully the character charlie appears with more interactions with noah i like the mother and daughter conflict and them figuring things out and bonding it’s really good it’s same shame that it we have to visualize the singing that’s the only bad part because the songs sound really good LOL

well this was very anticlimactic he can’t get a W to save his life

i wanted a fun slice of life chapter with some friendly face slapping but the one guy playing dirty i think it’s time to give the same treatment and except with cruel face slapping. somebody said it in discord but i also don’t like how he get’s hate cause of his relationship with her it’s really annoying hopefully author changes that soon i wanna see 50/50 of both personality for this match because one played soccer since he was little and one has the balancing tools for that tortured that was called training it’s a pretty good mix also az emotions be all over the place for a match like this i think they can mix pretty good, good chapter though

yeah i remember somebody said in the cord how they didn’t want this to be a story where he hated cause of her and she is just looked at like a saint i guess this is what the author is going for

didn’t he just have this?

or just kill him while you can and be done with it

cool name

i was thinking isn't el a sprite it would make complete sense if he had got 2 but man they bout to make my boy into another experiment he can't catch a break or maybe he just got el who is the highest rank spirit but he wouldn’t do that just cause he got one high rank spirit right? sure it can cause some trouble, but in the end it’s good i’m pushing toward the former option not only is it the most interesting it also makes the most sense and is the best option story wise ofc. i love miley tsundere vibes great chapter i look forward to the next

the mc is just to bad he doesn’t give off realistic vibes at all majority of man aren’t saying let’s get to know them first before we do anything with him he isn’t smart at all he’s well mentally slow his iq has to be really low he doesn’t have to have genius intellect but this guy is just straight dumb putting a random idiot in the strongest body with a bunch of women is so dumb because he’s like that jp beta male mc type that everyone hates

i hope this homebass plzzz

good chapter won’t lie

this is dumb he way stronger than people and he only uses his strength to get women the author never said anybody about him not being able to kill his siblings which he could've done easily but when it comes to taking this mine from the saintess the author decides to make him use his strength this guy is written strictly like a 3rd rate bum villian if he wasn't the protagonist of this story a lot wouldn't have went his way and for god does this guy every think without his penis?? like damn also the lack of you wanting to kill off characters is dumb why does he need everyone herione i would've kilt majority of the heriones with zhang fei also every herione just randomly hating him is so dumb even when he doesn't do nothing he is hated i don't nana hear no bullshit like cause he's a villain lol that ain't how it work but considering him being extremely greedy and everything still works in his favorite i shouldn't be surprised

also every herione just randomly hating him is so dumb even when he doesn’t do nothing he is hated i don’t wnana hear no bullshit like cause he’s a villain lol that ain’t how it work but considering him being extremely greedy and everything still works in his favorite i shouldn’t be surprised

tbh idk why i agree with this lol it seems hella op for it to just go by every thousand or 10,000