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I am happy and surprised that you mentioned the Philippines in your first chapter 'coz I am from that county. I hope you put more emphasis on that county and explore more. I just have comment on the chapters' length, I can say that those are shorts and I highly suggest to make it at least 1,500 words per chapter so that you can get the right benefits once you sign an exclusive contract and premium contract.Lastly, the story concept is great. It is good to read and interesting to readers.
The storytelling is great. The drama is on and it gives interest to readers to continue reading to know what will happen next.
I read the first ten chapters and their scenes are okay, however the writing style especially on technicalities needs improvement.
Liked this kind of scene
Not so fast, my dear 😺
What a good perk! 😊♠️
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Clubs are sometimes slightly off. I wish my school had more responsible officers and interesting events.
I can relate with this 😅
I can remember these vibes, how I missed my high school days.
Love this one.
The anger is smoking habaneros! 🥵