Review Detail of UnluckyLoveRomance in The Opening Shot

Item: The Opening Shot
Rating: 4.2

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UnluckyLoveRomanceLv24mthUnluckyLoveRomance

I love your narration style, a little bit long but not boring. The way the characters act are so natural, I can feel the drama and their connection.

The Opening Shot

Kari_Chan

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UnluckyLoveRomanceLv2UnluckyLoveRomance

The narrations are too lengthy. It's hard to read like I am like a walking ant. I also observed you put short dialogues. Dialogues make the story more lively and it makes the characters more alive.

Kari_Chan:Can you please elaborate on what you mean by a little bit long? I’m curious because I used to have my chapters shortened in the past, but I made them longer since I felt It was too short, and it was unfair for my readers.

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Kari_ChanAuthorKari_Chan

Can you please elaborate on what you mean by a little bit long? I’m curious because I used to have my chapters shortened in the past, but I made them longer since I felt It was too short, and it was unfair for my readers.

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Kari_ChanAuthorKari_Chan

And also thank you for the review. It’s well appreciated.

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UnluckyLoveRomanceLv2UnluckyLoveRomance

The length of each chapter is fine, no worries.

Kari_Chan:Can you please elaborate on what you mean by a little bit long? I’m curious because I used to have my chapters shortened in the past, but I made them longer since I felt It was too short, and it was unfair for my readers.

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Kari_ChanAuthorKari_Chan

Ok I will take you up on the. Add more dialogue to the story, I had some insecurities by adding too much dialogue, but I think I was overthinking. This helps a lot. Thank you again for being honest with me.

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