Unfortunately I wasted the whole first part doing almost nothing and it took like 20 chapters to finally commit to a real plot, so combined with how bad the beginning looks and just my overall style of writing no one really reads it to the point the only reason I even keep going is because I can't stand leaving it in a despicable limbo of never being finished. By the time I had a plan it was too late. I can tell you from statistics most people see how bad chapter 1 looks and stop reading right away.

Perfect grammar and am interesting enough start for a tower story.

Yeah I'm going for a more 'normal' kinda obsession relationship that I think many kids would develop if they discover their new family is a giant cuddle monster.Though you should try to avoid using swears in reviews because WN seems to filter them. I only know this review exists because I was curious about who made it on the list of fans, it's not listed on the novel itself and I never got a notification for it.My main issue is that I rushed too much and didn't describe enough since I tend to omit details I consider irrelevant.

Yeah I'm trying to slow down in later chapters and get out of the habit of omitting whatever I don't consider relevant to story.But as for human language it's briefly mentioned that she was able to use memory of past dragons for basic understanding and was taught from there.

Aside from some misspellings and minor grammar issues the story is actually decent so far

I'll keep track of this to see how the plot will improve. There isn't much info yet to compile a meaningful review.The grammar is acceptable, but there are a couple typos and places where the flow of the words could be better.The way the MC was put into the world was a little too abrupt as well, even for isekai standards.These can be compensated for if the plot turns out good.