webnovel
avatar
0
Beliarh

Beliarh

Lv1
2023-12-11 JoinedGlobal
-h

of reading

938

Read books

Moments

8
  • Beliarh
    Beliarh2mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter. Mirko is disappointed about the introduction, but this is a common occurrence in this fandom, so nothing new. It is difficult to find where Mirko is not in the harem than on the contrary, this is already the template of harems in this world.[img=update]

    This book has been deleted.
  • Beliarh
    Beliarh2mth
    Commented

    A beautiful piece of work. As for the change of forces, I think it should be strengthened, for example, it is better to reveal the quirks of schoolchildren and heroes, you can introduce new villains, the same Noma can be introduced as much as you like, but the love interest, well, with the character of the current Midoriya, Jiro is well combined except Momo, they both had quirks somehow crookedly shown, and of the heroines with the character of Midoria that you showed is a joke, Midnight and Mirko do not really mix if you do not change the canon, there are also Ryuko and Cats, but the first is little disclosed in the canon and rarely happens with someone a couple, the authors do not like dragons, although in your case they would have had a reason to get to know each other because of Nejire, she practiced with her.

    This book has been deleted.
  • Beliarh
    Beliarh2mth
    Commented

    Why does the class give the characteristic that he is a warrior or at least a hybrid with a warrior, and the hero himself pumps physical stats, he is a child, but even they know that such stats are for those who count on physical strength. Nevertheless, write well, I am waiting for the continuation.

    Ch 13 Chapter 13: Dursleys
    altalt
    HP: The Magical Gamer with Pheonix
    Book&Literature · vilan864
    detail
  • Beliarh
    Beliarh2mth
    Commented

    To be honest, the actions of the hero of the last chapters are not clear to me. At first, he says that he learned disguise to hide and immediately risks trying to keep an eye on Sitri, then arriving in his city it is not clear why he went to fight the Wandering Devil revealing himself, and when he was attacked by exorcists, instead of leaving, he decided to fight them, and now he is almost subordinate to them, even those who do not know about the supernatural side should know that Christianity is weak in Japan and knowing about the demons in the neighboring city, believing that they have some kind of power without even knowing anything is stupid, and the exorcists themselves act like outcasts who cooperate with the fallen, immediately attacking indiscriminately and it is unclear on what basis detaining, planting and interrogating, if they behaved like that, the owners of the holy mechanisms and the organization of magicians would have already been cut out, the church is not as strong as the angels or other factions.

    Ch 15 015
    altalt
    Highschool DxD: Perfection System!
    Anime & Comics · BeixuanLovell
    detail
  • Beliarh
    Beliarh2mth
    Commented

    Did you give him some kind of weakened sharingan and named six eyes? The "six eyes" have improved senses and the ability to see energy is a side ability, not the main one.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: My New Life
    altalt
    DXD: Phenex System
    Anime & Comics · legacydroid
    detail
  • Beliarh
    Beliarh2mth
    Commented

    I liked the way the hero behaves, as well as his secrecy and desire to become even smarter and stronger. Will the hero join the demons? I'm tired of watching those who have the potential to become strong quickly agree to become part of a faction, which gives more enemies and problems than benefits, so I wanted to find out in advance so as not to be disappointed. Can the hero study the matrix of evil figures to create his own counterpart, giving his team his own system instead of demonic power? Nevertheless, thanks for the work, in my opinion one of the best in fandom in recent times, I will wait for the continuation.[img=update]

    Ch 12 012
    altalt
    Highschool DxD: Perfection System!
    Anime & Comics · BeixuanLovell
    detail
  • Beliarh
    Beliarh2mth
    Commented

    I've never understood why the authors make Izuka insecure and cowardly regardless of his powers. He is already invulnerable and as I understand it, lasers do not exhaust him much, there is no "will" in this world, and kairoseki and sea water act only in the world of the piece, not in the mga. How can you remain insecure when no one is able to hurt you? Immateriality + lasers already makes him the top of the list of heroes.

    Ch 17 Chapter 17: School Start
    altalt
    My Hero Academia: World Fishing Quirk
    Anime & Comics · LukasS
    detail
  • Beliarh
    Beliarh4mth
    Commented

    Why aren't the hero's stats improving? It is known that fruits make you physically stronger several times, of course Zoan gives the biggest increase, but the rest also strengthen at least a little, and here was the mythical zoan and logia. Thank you for the works, in my opinion the best work of the Riser [img=update]

    Ch 15 Betrayal
    altalt
    DXD: The Awakening Of Phenex
    Anime & Comics · Mirko22
    detail