I might not be able to respond to all of you for the next month. so keep that in mind when replying to me but if you do I'll respond back to you when I could.

Yeah...I'm that good at ending arcs to be fair. which I plan on reading other stories on how they end their arcs or endings in general to get a better understanding other than that I like having a good pacing that's consistent it keeps the flow of the story intact and keeps the readers not getting lost.

That's still going to be a mystery even after the rewrite...

Interesting suggestion. could you explain in more detail?

The original plan was to go through weaker verses in an order I'd say things went south when people decided on DxD since a lot of readers are just down bad. ngl but at the same time, other readers explained the reason why. the world building in DxD is very large and there's a lot left unexplored. which I failed in that aspect when writing the DxD. Arc during the rewrite I'll add more and explore more about the story during my break. I can also understand you losing your interest. since we've been focusing on Zaegar more than Yhwach. but at the same time I feel like we haven't given Zaegar enough screen time I've reread the chapters quickly ( Might not be correct ) Zaegar is only present in about 20-30% of the entire story. the other majority are Yhwach and other characters. but at the same time, it might just be you. or maybe me since I'm experiencing burnout. which I hope won't let me drop the story. I suggest you read the chapters after the big mom incident if you haven't already Zaegar didn't have a lot of screen time in that.

Zaegar is mentioned in CFYOW light novel. by Ichibei. ( Not really by name and all that ) and the primordial/original world of bleach. I'm not going to spoil anything so don't worry. I agree with you that Zaegar's presence isn't needed in every arc. but at the same time, I don't intent to use Zaegar as just a backup if Yhwach encounters someone stronger than him. that's to predictable and out of Zaegar's nature... I see what you mean by the one piece arc. but like I explained earlier there need to be some dull and boring moments because this story isn't focused on the reader's opinions all the time sure you all have choices and decide to make for the next thing to happen. but at the same time remember this also affects the characters and the flow of the story and things that might happen or not might happen at all like I explained way back at the end of TWD arc and other arcs other choices weren't picked & explored but due to the story not having a lot of votes and things happened I had to go on with either a single vote or wait it out. ( I forgot half the things I wanted to say so I went on rambling )

See. Killing off Emi is more in character for Zaegar's character. like Zaegar said he represents the darkest aspects of Yhwach. I wasn't planning on giving him any sympathy or even many emotions since he's like Ryuk from Death Note. and like the previous 2 chapters, Zaegar said He may be Yhwach's best buddy. but he's also his greatest ally and worst nightmare... I'm getting off topic but everything that happens is for a reason. even if you find it boring sometimes it is necessary for the character's growth. you might not understand what I'm saying right now but when the book ends you'll understand.

In simple terms I'm not going to be active for a month or two.

Why even write a review for something as simple as a synopsis? I clearly stated that it's outdated. did you forget reviews are meant to be for the stories, not the synopsis?

Also If I were to let Yhwach be at his full power and let's say win. I would have sent him to the Fate verse or Marvel. Seeing as he's Op, there are a lot of other characters who can easily defeat Yhwach. I thought of doing something like Fate/Yhwach similar to Fate/Quincy but it'll only be Fate/Stay Night or Fate/Zero a 20-chapter mini story. but then I decided Nah.

I might not do K & N seeing as how we know nothing about them other than theories and all that. also why Z the Zombie?

I'll explain a bit so you can understand a little more about what I was doing with this story. If I let Yhwach stay at his full power he'd return to the bleach verse and redo his whole plan removing the concept of death and returning it to its primordial state. so that'll be the end of the story. at the same time, I didn't like the idea of nerfing him but it has to be done for the story to work out in the beginning. Anyway, you shouldn't read the beginning because I'm planning on rewriting the whole thing or a reboot.

I'm surprised you began reading the story Psylord and here I thought you dropped it due to the start. what changed your mind?

Shiki The Golden Lion.

No problem hope you enjoyed today's chapter

I'm surprised you haven't got spoiled since the JJK community is known to spoil every single new chapter once it drops or they managed to get the leaks.

Have you seen the new chapters of jujutsu kaisen?