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  • DaoistEtFHDt
    DaoistEtFHDt18d
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    thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 14 Chapter 13 CLANS
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    Game of thrones: The Adventure Ned Stark
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  • DaoistEtFHDt
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    Sonic System Records, Deadbeat Studios, Rythem Nation, Verse Vault, Flow Factory

    Ch 25 Labels
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    Convict to King
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  • DaoistEtFHDt
    DaoistEtFHDt1mth
    Replied to Vincent_0580

    Should take the rest of Scandinavia, France, Spain, Italy, and North Africa during the 2nd world War at least.

    [Picture of Cadia's territories right now]
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  • DaoistEtFHDt
    DaoistEtFHDt1mth
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    So basically, they're the HRE

    [Picture of Cadia's territories right now]
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  • DaoistEtFHDt
    DaoistEtFHDt1mth
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    Maybe have him unlock his chakra sense, so he has some sensor abilities. would make sense after being blinded

    I wrote this chapter, but I felt like something was missing in it... Give me your opinion.
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  • DaoistEtFHDt
    DaoistEtFHDt1mth
    Replied to FirstHokage

    You're welcome, Hokage-sama. Though I would definitely have him learn the Uchiha taijutsu style, wind nature (especially for chakra flow as, like that jonin, you can't bleed your enemies if wounds are cauterized), fuinijutsu, and stealth, also maybe a daily exchange between him and Yomi about sensing techniques. it's kinda a basic skill. I would definitely like to see him and yomi get ANBU training as he could be really deadly with proper stealth and assassination skills. Though, one thing most fan fiction never covers is longer-term info gathering or stealth missions.

    Ch 96 fatigue 
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    Naruto: Chronicles of a Fire Ninja
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  • DaoistEtFHDt
    DaoistEtFHDt1mth
    Replied to DaoistEtFHDt

    Though using fuinijutsu would work as a way to increase knowledge. Also more stealth techniques, hiding from any sensor, moving so fast. The red flash of Konaha, haha

    Ch 96 fatigue 
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  • DaoistEtFHDt
    DaoistEtFHDt1mth
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    Honestly, I like your story. Though, you can artificially increase your affinity/train a new chakra affinity by doing the nature transformation exercises for the different elements. I would also approve of kenjutsu(super lethal chakra flow with fire and the sharingen for pinpoint accuracy and control) uchiha taijustu(interceptor style) training and more emphasis on shurikenjutsu. But honestly, right now, I just can't afford $5 a month. Though I would suggest posting your wonderful story on Royalroad as well for cross-platform promoting.

    Ch 96 fatigue 
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  • DaoistEtFHDt
    DaoistEtFHDt2mth
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    Thanks for the chapter! I like it!

    Ch 149 [interlude]The army with a state II
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  • DaoistEtFHDt
    DaoistEtFHDt3mth
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    Chapter name is spelled wrong.

    Ch 59 Starlight
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    Hogwarts: the magic of music
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  • DaoistEtFHDt
    DaoistEtFHDt3mth
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    Wow! I did not see that coming at all! Great chapter.

    Ch 20 Chapter 20: Gulltown
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    Knight's Journey in Westeros
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  • DaoistEtFHDt
    DaoistEtFHDt3mth
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    I have to wonder what kingdom he should conquer next. The North seems very possible but wouldn't logistically work. Maybe an alliance with the North. Conquering the Riverlands is the only real option till Jon Arryn dies. Then wait for the kings death. Bam 7 kingdoms conquered.

    Ch 137 Construction of a state
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    DaoistEtFHDt3mth
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    Ice is not spellforged bronze, according to canon. It is Valyrian steel, also known as dragonsteel. It is made with iron through a combination of pattern-welding(modern Damascus steel) and spells. it is also thought that it was made with the fire of dragons and blood magic. Valyrians only used fire and blood magics, apparently. There are only 227 Valyrian weapons known in Westeros, though some have been lost. Supposedly, there were thousands made by the ancient Valyrian Freehold's Dragonlords.

    Ch 21 Chapter 21
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    Starks of Winterfell
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  • DaoistEtFHDt
    DaoistEtFHDt3mth
    Replied to TheFanficGod

    It's the Most Ancient and Noble House of Potter. The others are in the Sacred 28. but the term "House " is pretty common in both Fanfic and Cannon for the different Wizarding families

    Heir of Potter Family"
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  • DaoistEtFHDt
    DaoistEtFHDt3mth
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    Should be heir of House Potter, right?

    Heir of Potter Family"
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