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    No_One_Special_794315d
    Replied to The_unKnown2

    I thought the original got dropped?

    Marvel(Deadpool): Transmigrated into the research institute
    Anime & Comics · The_unKnown2
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  • No_One_Special_7943
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    Just a small nitpick is some dialogue feels kinda iffy. When Rick repeats "It sounds like a helicopter" it could have been just shortened to "a helicopter" then he runs off, Or when Roy said "You see Rick, I've got no other place or people to return to" could have been shortened to like "Sure Rick, I've got nothing waiting for me.". It's probably just be me but it seems a little off.

    Ch 4 4- On the move
    TWD: The protean
    TV · ScarletQC
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  • No_One_Special_7943
    No_One_Special_79431mth
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    Everything's great except chapter length.

    Ch 11 ⚠️⚠️Attention readers ⚠️⚠️
    Marvel: Why Can't Luck Be a superpower
    Movies · LORD_INDRA_
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  • No_One_Special_7943
    No_One_Special_79431mth
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    My brother, you're doing Allah's work out here basically writing an entirely new book and making it better. Keep up the good work.

    Ch 10 *C09 - Memories of a life once lived.
    My diary system in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · TheWandaShip
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  • No_One_Special_7943
    No_One_Special_79431mth
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    A quick 5 star review for the 10 chapters so far. I tried reading the MTL and didn't even get past chapter 2. Pretty damn great work you're doing here, If you keep going as you are now I've no doubt this will be great.

    My diary system in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · TheWandaShip
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  • No_One_Special_7943
    No_One_Special_79432mth
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    The suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper long blocks of text are a bit hard to read, maybe try to separate them a bit?

    Ch 15 Chapter 15 Fuel Cell
    Marvel's Interstellar Hamster
    Video Games · DG117
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  • No_One_Special_7943
    No_One_Special_79433mth
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    Timelord sub-class eventually? It'd be interesting to see the interactions between her and the Doctor when/if she goes to Doctor Who.

    Gripping the sonic screwdriver in her hand, she pressed the button down, causing a soft buzzing noise to emanate from it. The second she did so, she blinked as something began to happen. The Tardis began to shake slightly, before her eyes widened as she heard a soft sound emulate from it, and the console began to blink.
    Unique Gamers Travels
    TV · ArtoriaPendragon_
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  • No_One_Special_7943
    No_One_Special_79435mth
    Replied to Ganfort

    Alex Keller from Modern Warfare?

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